sareer ohi dil banoti hoye

dil vata ke kayi ahsiq baad 'ch roye

alarhpune wich kuri ne kita pyar

baneya doha layi sanja (common) hathiyar

bhuleya isq wich parents da satikar

rehan dohe ishq wich khoye

sareer ohi dil banoti hoye

akhi dekheya  kahiyan da pyar he sire chareya

kayi thai bharava da gussa ashiq te vareya

sache ashiq pyar khatir swaraga nu gaye

dil vata ke kayi ashiq baad 'ch roye

cha -cha wich karavayi love marrige

par pata na lage kive kari da kive family manage

do- chu sala picho soochan karvaya kyon prem vyah

pushan raab ton asi kita kehra gunah

mappeya de laadla laadli ki kare kar rahe

sareer ohi dil banoti hoye

rehani sajano a he reet jug di

sake nahi sakdi ishq di agg magdi

arsh ne sooch -sooch tappe a proye

sareer ohi dil banoti hoye

dil vata ke 100 wicho 90 roye

Bahut khoob 22 g. Ik request hai tuhanu ke kavitawan punjabi poetry community ch post kareya karo.. Kyoki us di ik alag community bani hoyi hai... Bhul chuk maaf.

CAKAR A HAI KI MENU A COMMUNITY BAHUT PASAND HAI DOOJI GAL A KE JE TUSI AGYA DEVO TAN APA AGHE TON POETRY WICH PA DEYA KARANGE

Aagya di kehdi gal aa veer tuhadi site hai jithe dil karda pao main ta kehnda c ke othe sareyan di nazar pawegi..

OK 22

sat shri akal arshdeep ji

tuhadi kavita bahut sohni hai, aajkal de sammohan pyar d ek jhalak pesh kardi hai.

keep it up.

satwinder ji da kehna theek hai ,j tusi punjabi section vich es nu rakho tan bahut he wadhia.

likhde sohna ho,likhde raho.

thanx.

sat sri akal hardeep i am agree with u next time i will follow ur and satwinder's advice

hardeep naal ji lagauna bhul gaya ape laga leo kyoki punjabizm wich ji da bahut riwaj hai

ha ha pls its ok

han ek hor gal, ha ha da v riwaj hai a main bhul he gaya