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Satwinder  Satti
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Ek raat
Raati taare tera sirnawa puchde,
chan bebas baitha eh dikhawa puchde,
chare pase chup-chap kalla uchi-2 bola main,
eh raat vi lagda so gayi hai,
kihde kol dukhde khola main.
Tim timaunda taare lage aa ke mere kol bawe,
athru naino dig painda c lagda c jive haul pawe,
kyo door chale gaye oh kehde paase tola main,
eh raat vi................
Kaali ghata poore zora ute saath nibhaundi nazar aawe,
ikalapan jaape khandar chup mainu wad-wad khawe,
ohdi yaada ch dil tadafda jad khat purane frola main,
eh raat vi................
Loki kehnde chan taareya wargi yari kise nibhauni na,
par asi ta akhi dekh liya chan tareya di koi jeoni na,
SATTI wang oh vi badi door ne tahio hanju dola main,
Eh raat vi lagda so gayi hai kihde kol dukhde khol main....
28 Jul 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya 22 g...
28 Jul 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Thanks veer ji hamesha di tara hausla den layi
08 Aug 2009

yuvi 22 uv
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gud one satti veer.keep sharing.
08 Aug 2009

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bahut khoob ehsaas beyaan keete ne veer
keep it up......!!
10 Aug 2009

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kaabiil-e-taareef................
jiyoo.....
10 Aug 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Thanku yuvi veer, gill veer and arshdeep ji
13 Aug 2009

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Nice one ...JEO !!!!!!
13 Aug 2009

Reet Kaur
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Sat Shri Aakaal
Very nice ,,, god blesss u
13 Aug 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Thanku balihar veer and reet ji
14 Aug 2009

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