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gurpreet  kaur
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'ਕੁਝ'

ਵਕਤ ਦੀ
ਉਝਲ ਚੋਂ
ਫਿਸਲ
ਕੁਝ ਕਿਰ ਕੇ..
.ਤੇ ਕੁਝ ਭੁਰ ਕੇ
"ਕੁਝ"
ਮੇਰੇ ਅੰਦਰ ਹੀ
ਖਤਮ ਹੋ ਗਿਆ...

ਹੁਣ ਨਿੱਤ
ਭੂਰੇ-ਝੂਰੇ ਚੌ
"ਕੁਝ'
ਜਨਮਦਾ 'ਤੇ ਵਿਗਸਦਾ
ਪਰਕਰਮਾ ਕਰਦਾ
ਰਹਿੰਦਾ ਏ....

- ਗੁਰਪਰੀਤ ਕੌਰ
09 Aug 2009

ਫ਼ਿਰੋਜ਼ਪੁਰੀਆ ..
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bahut hi khoobsurat khyaal ne g... keep sharing...
09 Aug 2009

Amrinder Singh
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nice one ...!!
keep sharing..!!
09 Aug 2009

Reet Kaur
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Sat Shri Aakaal
Bohaat sohnaa likhyaaa

god bless u
13 Aug 2009

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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nice words dee........keep sharing good stuff
14 Aug 2009

gurpreet  kaur
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thanx
Sandeep, amrinder, reet & aman gill.....
15 Aug 2009

Kahlon Gagandeep Singh
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bade ache tarike naal khayala de walwalia nu kagaj te utaria tusi.............god bless u dear
06 Sep 2009

sukhpal singh
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very well written,.........great

25 Jan 2020

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