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Gurpreet Khokhar
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Udaari Khushi
Ikk aas mili see jiwan dee
Asin apna aap savaar liya

Oh de aakhe alfazan nu
Asin dil de vich utaar liya

Jo banke pather baitha see
Sadke jama oh mehram de
Jihne pather nu rabb ukaar liya

Ess patjhad hoyi zindagi nu
Na koi aas baharan dee
Ohda palla fadke lagey see
Asin apni rooh nu thaar liya

Haddian da dhanjha baniya see
Asin apna aap guya liya see
Ikk khushi osdi dee khatir hee main apna aap sawaar liya

Ki pata see jhale dil nu eh
Eh chanen bs kujh pal da see
Fir ohi badal ghum de aa gaye
Main fir ohna vich dhaal liya

Ki karaan main khushi udaari da
Kine karne mangve chaa sare
Eh preet jo tuttpaina see
Ne fir apne aap nu maar liya.
01 Sep 2014

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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nce
01 Sep 2014

Navi ......
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gurpreet g bht hi sohna likhya hai...

 

salute to your dedication towards your love....

 

par pyaar hmesha swaarda hai gurpreet g..... je sacha hai ta......

 

nazariya hai apna apna.....

 

likhan da dhang kmaal hai......

 

khush raho.....

 

05 Sep 2014

Harpinder Mander
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Very good veer...bahut sohna likhiaa hai...

Jio...
06 Sep 2014

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