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Gurpreet

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Dehleeza'n teria'n nu parvaaan ho jaava'n

Tere dil da na poora hon wala armaan ho java'n

Badal deva'n tere ton mausam udasian da

Tere layi main khushia'n dee khaan ho java'n

Aanch je aave kade tere ya tere kirdaar te

Tere laayi dhaal tere layi kirpaan ho java'n

Mehakaun layi phulla'n naal teria'n vaadia'n

Main aape aap ikk sunna Viabaan ho jaava'n

Muka diya'n raata'n kaalia'n te sune raaste

Teri har saver dee mithi muskaan ho jaava'n

Hai tammana ikk ki mehram layi aisa kuchh kara'n

Preet aap savaar k aap hairaan ho jaava'n

Preetkhokhar

<p><img style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;" alt="" /><em style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;">Dehleeza'n teria'n nu parvaaan ho jaava'n</em></p>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Tere dil da na poora hon wala armaan ho java'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em><br /></em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Badal deva'n tere ton mausam udasian da </em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Tere layi main khushia'n dee khaan ho java'n</em></div>
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<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Aanch je aave kade tere ya tere kirdaar te </em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Tere laayi dhaal tere layi kirpaan ho java'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em><br /></em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Mehakaun layi phulla'n naal teria'n vaadia'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Main aape aap ikk sunna Viabaan ho jaava'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em><br /></em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Muka diya'n raata'n kaalia'n te sune raaste</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Teri har saver dee mithi muskaan ho jaava'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em><br /></em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Hai tammana ikk ki mehram layi aisa kuchh kara'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Preet aap savaar k aap hairaan ho jaava'n</em></div>
<div style="line-height: normal; text-align: start; color: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.701961); font-family: UICTFontTextStyleBody; font-size: 17px;"><em>Preetkhokhar</em></div>
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25 Feb 2015

JAGJIT SINGH

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Yes ! Gurpreet Ji, This is it !

ਖ਼ਿਆਲ, ਲੈਅ ਅਤੇ ਢਾਂਚੇ ਪੱਖੋਂ ਇਹ ਕਿਰਤ ਇਕ ਸ਼ਲਾਘਾ ਯੋਗ ਸ਼ਾਹਕਾਰ ਹੈ | ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਲਈ ਕੁਝ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਪਰਾਕਾਸ਼ਠਾ ਹੈ ਇਸ ਵਿਚ - ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ ਜੀ | ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ |

ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ |

<p><strong><span style="color: #3366ff;">Yes ! Gurpreet Ji, This is it !</span></strong></p>
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<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow: hidden;"><strong><span style="color: #3366ff;">ਖ਼ਿਆਲ, ਲੈਅ ਅਤੇ ਢਾਂਚੇ ਪੱਖੋਂ ਇਹ ਕਿਰਤ ਇਕ ਸ਼ਲਾਘਾ ਯੋਗ ਸ਼ਾਹਕਾਰ ਹੈ | ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਲਈ ਕੁਝ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਪਰਾਕਾਸ਼ਠਾ ਹੈ ਇਸ ਵਿਚ - ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ ਜੀ | ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ |</span></strong></div>
<div id="_mcePaste" style="position: absolute; left: -10000px; top: 0px; width: 1px; height: 1px; overflow: hidden;"><strong><span style="color: #3366ff;">ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ |</span></strong></div>
<p><strong><span style="color: #3366ff;">ਖ਼ਿਆਲ, ਲੈਅ ਅਤੇ ਢਾਂਚੇ ਪੱਖੋਂ ਇਹ ਕਿਰਤ ਇਕ ਸ਼ਲਾਘਾ ਯੋਗ ਸ਼ਾਹਕਾਰ ਹੈ | ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਲਈ ਕੁਝ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਪਰਾਕਾਸ਼ਠਾ ਹੈ ਇਸ ਵਿਚ - ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ ਜੀ | ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ |</span></strong></p>
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<p><strong><span style="color: #3366ff;">ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ |</span></strong></p>
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25 Feb 2015

navpreet

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Love is always giving not demanding.gurpreet ji tuhadi eh rachna kuj eho jeha ehsaas karwaundi hai.pyaar naal bharpoor tuhadi kavita mere dil nu choo gayi.simply awsome

26 Feb 2015

Navi

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a sense of love , a sense of sacrifice, a sense of dedication.....

its simply wooooooowwww gurpreet g.....

pyaar nal bharpoor ik bahut sohni rachna.....apne mehram lyi kuch kar mukan da honsla.....

bahut touching te full of senstivity

likhde raho ......shukriya share karan lyi.......

khush raho....stay blessed....

27 Feb 2015

Sandeep

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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਸ਼ਾਨਦਾਰ ਰਚਨਾ ਪੇਸ਼ ਕੀਤੀ ੲੇ ਤੁਸੀ ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਬਾਈ ਜੀ,

ਸੱਚੀ ਮੁਹੱਬਤ ਦੇ ਕਈ ਪਹਿਲੂ ਸਾਹਵੇਂ ਧਰਦੀ ੲਿਹ ਰਚਨਾ ਸੱਚਮੁੱਚ ਬਾ ਕਮਾਲ ਏ ਜੀ । ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਜੀ।

27 Feb 2015

Gurpreet

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Jagjit ji, navpreet jee, navi jee and sandeep Bro
Tuhade views da rini han te tuhade haunsle to himmat laike likhan di koshish karda
Te lafza nu kagaz te waa lainda hai
Bahut dilo'n dhanbaad jihna waqt de ke Rachna read kiti or apne keemti views dite
Jeo

27 Feb 2015

gurmit

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ਬਹੁਤ ਭਾਵ-ਪੂਰਕ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ ਅਨੰਦ ਆ ਗਿਆ..ਸਰ ਜੀ
ਤੂੰ ਕਦੇ ਦੇਂਵੇਂ ਦਿਲਾਸਾ ਤਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਪ੍ਰਵਾਨ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਵਾਂ।
ਅੱਖੀਆਂ ਮੀਟ ਸਹੀ ਮੈਂ ਸੁਫਨਿਆ 'ਚ ਆਂਵਾਂ।
ਝਾਕ ਕੇ ਵੇਖਦੋਂ ਪਿੱਛੇ,ਰਿਸ਼ਤੇ ਦੂਸ਼ਵਾਰ ਨਾ ਹੁੰਦੇ,
ਮਹਿਸੂਸ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ ਕਰਦੋਂ ਅਰਮਾਨ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਵਾਂ।