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komaldeep kaur
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come home again

A poem written by my son Gurpahul singh on PISHAWER MAASSCARE

 

Come Home Again

Mom! I want to come home again.

Hope you don’t scream and scold,

Your lovely lunch has gone cold.

No, it’s not me to blame,

Had come someone else to claim.

Mom! I want to come home again.

The crackers smoked our Social Science,

The teacher told to read the lines.

We forgot! Listening through the pane,

The school urging, “Hide in the lane.”

Mom! I want to come home again.

The shouts shook our school’s core,

The heartless knockings cracked the door;

Called I to you- you never came,

To stop me crying- your name.

Mom! I want to come home again.

And oh! The black board became red,

Tears wept the teacher’s drilled head.

Called they, “Come out all whose fathers train”

& we beheaded to touch the lion’s mane.

Mom! I want to come home again.

And do ask Dad- “Was it my fault

To share his blood and his salt?”

For something holed my clothes to stain,

That ‘blood’ just trickled down the drain.

Mom! I want to come home again.

Don’t worry! The pain didn’t last for long,

Soon was heard your sleep-time song;

But your future IAS just got slain,

“God, why to give us this strain?”

Mom! I want to come home again.

Just take me once to your breast,

There’s nowhere any peace to rest.

Do ask them- What did they gain?

My life- was it such bargain?

Mom! I want to come home again.

“And really Mom! I want to come home once again.”

29 Apr 2015

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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Ah ! the heart-rending wail of a child's heart on that black tragedy unleashed by some mindless zombies in Peshawar, poured forth on a piece of paper so very artistically and beautifully ! A child's heart is the heart of an angel...

 

The poem reminds me of my teenage. My first poem "The Road Builder" was in English...(the diary is lost, and its Punjabi translation is on the forum)


Gurpahul, Beta Ji, Very well written !

 

God bless the talented youngman...

 

The most touching lines ...


Take me once to your bosom,  it is best

To have eternal peace and blissful rest.

 

Madam, it is something to be proud of...

 

29 Apr 2015

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@Gurpahul well done
Touching !!!
03 May 2015

komaldeep kaur
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thaaaaanx jagjit sir, i was eager to read ur valuble comments on pahul's poem but wait karni payi due to some error.bahut shukria sir, tuhadi ditti shabashi pahul nu navi sedh te hallasheri devegi.....

thaanx mavi sir, for encouraging and blessing pahul.

04 May 2015

navpreet randhawa
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pahul well done...
06 May 2015

komaldeep kaur
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thaaaanx nav
06 May 2015

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