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jodh sandhu
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ਗੱਲ ਬਣ ਜੇ


ਗੱਲਾ
ਸਾਡੀਆ 'ਚ ਆਵੇ
ਤਾ ਗੱਲ ਬਣ ਜੇ,

ਗੱਲ
ਅੱਗੇ
ਵਧਾਵੇ,
ਤਾ ਗੱਲ ਬਣ 
ਜੇ,

ਮੂੰਹ
ਸਾਡੇ ਵੱਲ ਘੁਮਾਵੇ
ਤਾ
ਗੱਲ ਵਣ ਜੇ,

ਲੌਕੀ ਕਿਹੰਦੇ
ਮੇਰਾ
ਨਾ ਬੜਾ
ਸੌਹਣਾ,

ਜੇ 
ਤੂੰ ਬੁੱਲਾ ਤੇ ਲਿਆਵੇ
ਤਾ ਗੱਲ ਵਣ ਜੇ,

ਮਨਾ
*SANDHU* ਨੂੰ ਤੇਰੀ ਗਲੀ
ਜਾਣਾ,
ਸਾਡੀ ਗਲੀ ਚ ਆਵੇ ਤਾ ਗੱਲ
ਬਣ
ਜੇ....

01 Sep 2010

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wah sandu shab

 

akhiri do line kamal ne

 

teri gali ch ana mana h ...........

 

bhut khub veer g

 

01 Sep 2010

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bahut vadhiya 22g

Keep it up......

01 Sep 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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22 G eh DEBI da likhiya hoyia hai jisnu tusin apna NAAM de rahe ho...jo k bahut SHARAM wali gall hai.....esnu tusin Debi de rachna keh ke share karde taan jyada vadhia hunda.....

 

SAADI GAL VICH AAVEN TAAN GAL BAN JE

GAL DIL NU LAAVEN TAAN GAL BAN JE
GAL AGGE VADHAVEN TAAN GAL BAN JE
MUH IDDHAR GHUMAVE TAAN GAL BAN JE
LOKI AAKHDE MERA NAU BADA SOHNA
J TU BULLAN TE LEYAVE TAAN GAL BAN JE
THEKE WALI SHARAAB HUN NAHI CHARHDI
J NAINA WICHON PILAAVEN TAAN GAL BAN JE
MANA "DEBI" NU TERI GALI JAANA
SADI GALI CH AAVEN TAAN GAL BAN JE

 

Khair ehde waarey 'ch vee Debi 22 ne ik sheyar boliya hoiya ae waise taan.....

 

"Debi" de jo sheyar chura ke gaane likhde ne,

ohna noo v loki kahi likhari jaande ne...........

 

 

01 Sep 2010

jodh sandhu
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balhar veer meh kite eh ta nhi likhya k meh likhya meh ta just ethy share kita e ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,eh menu changga laga c


01 Sep 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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ਮਨਾ
*SANDHU* ਨੂੰ ਤੇਰੀ ਗਲੀ
ਜਾਣਾ,
ਸਾਡੀ ਗਲੀ ਚ ਆਵੇ ਤਾ ਗੱਲ
ਬਣ
ਜੇ....

 

ehna lines wich Debi de naam dee jagah te "SANDHU" fir kis taran aa giya 22 G ? eh taan ehee show karda ae k eh Debi da nahin "Sandhu" da ae..........

 

 baaki 22 g tusin jo v changa laggey share kar sakde ho bas asli writer daa naam nahi remove karna chahida.......

01 Sep 2010

jodh sandhu
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veer  meh sandhu aa meh bhave tera likhya hy kise nu msg kru ga ta othy v sandhu likhu ga ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thik aa veer ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


01 Sep 2010

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No, actually u cannot put ur name if it is nt written by u...

01 Sep 2010

jodh sandhu
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veer menu eh nhi pta c

te eh koi rule hy k nhi likhna

naam apna 

 

01 Sep 2010

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