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ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਗੈਰ-ਜ਼ਿਮੇਵਾਰ ਹਾਂ........

haan main gair zimmevaar haan........

mainu nahi pta.

kidaan chuk k turida hai........

sit utte zimmevariyaan da boj.........

mainu kise di koi parvah nahi..............

haan main gair-zimmevaar haan.............

 

 

 

 

mere to nahi chukk hundi  hun.........

khokhle rishteyaan di pand.....

meri soch  vich hun dam nahi reha...........

"sarb-parvanit " hon da.....

...mere to nahi milaayi jaandi hun haan vich haan....

lokan de man vang bdlde waqt  nal.....

mera ta hun dum ghutda hai......

is khulle asmaan heth v.....

 

 

 

hun main khrgosh vang akhaan nahi meech sakda.....

dekh k kise di akh vich tairde hanju.....

k honi aye t mainu hra k chli jaye.

eh hun main nahi hon dvanga........

meriyaanakhaan to nahi de honi  hun oh lachaar takkni......

jo kise de tars di mohtaj rehndi hai.....

 

 

main gair-zimmevaar hi taa haan..............

jo sme agge hikk thok k khra ho gya haan..

t akhda haan.......

haan das.....meri ki galti c........

main nahi larda hun "antr-dvandh" di koi v jung..........

meri niga hun  dishadde to paar dekhdi hai.........

 

 

 

 

 

haan main gair zimmevaar haan.......

tuc kujh kehnde rho........

par mainu nahi pta.

kidaanchuk k turida hai...

sir utte zimmevaariyaan di pand.............


13 Oct 2010

ਸਟਾਲਿਨਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ  ਸਿੱਧੂ
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sabaash son chidiye........

 

sikhar hi kr ditta .....

 

jeaunda reh.....

 

ehna lafzha de mech de taaref krn layi mere kol lafzh nai hn ,,,

 

 

 

13 Oct 2010

Amrinder Singh
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well i agree to stalin bai......

 

no words...!!! behreen rachna...

13 Oct 2010

Nimarbir Singh
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great

 

ਵਾਹ ਜੀ ਵਾਹ...!!


ਸੱਚੀਂ ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਲਾਜਵਾਬ ਲਿਖਿਆ


ਨਹੀਂ ਰੀਸਾਂ ਤੁਹਾਡੀਂਆਂ...ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ

13 Oct 2010

Aman Jassal
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ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਗੈਰ-ਜ਼ਿਮੇਵਾਰ ਹਾਂ........

Bahoot vadiya likha hai janab...

 

 

hun main khrgosh vang akhaan nahi meech sakda..... dekh k kise di akh vich tairde hanju..... k honi aye t mainu hra k chli jaye. eh hun main nahi hon dvanga........ meriyaanakhaan to nahi de honi hun oh lachaar takkni...... jo kise de tars di mohtaj rehndi hai.....

14 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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thanks...........

m feeling HUMBLED at ur response.............

 

sbda bhut bhut shukriya...........

14 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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Bahut vadiya g.. bahut vadiya... baki no cmments

14 Oct 2010

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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u are an volcano kuknus

n aaha laava niklda sab in d form of ur poems very intense......keep writing n keep sharing g.

29 Dec 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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tnku

@stalin,ammi,nimar,harjit,aman,amandeep : bhut shukria................

29 Dec 2010

Jass Panaichan
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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ .....ਸਾਂਝਿਆਂ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ 

ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ .....ਸਾਂਝਿਆਂ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ 

 

29 Dec 2010

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