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gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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jo do shabd main likhda...

ho gea c jithe zameer takk gehne,,, jithe imaan vik rea c... main otho ik be-imaan lako leyaea haan... sajjan de shehar gea jithe mera pyar vik rea  c...

othon main do roohan da kar visal lako lai aayea haan...

dharti ne vekhi pehli parwaz aadmi d,,, fer eh v vekhea k asmaan vik rea c...

tutt gea mera v bharam k pyar mull nahin vikda...

ese daro k mera ishq v kite gehne na ho jawe...

                            main tutte dil da ik armaan lako lai aayea haan ,,,

                       kal nu pai jaani ae kismat likhaun layi v rishwat d lod... jo mere layi bharega main oh ik dhanwan lako lai aayea haan...

                             dar pai gea c mainu k marn pchhon do hath zameen milgei ya nahin... ese layi main ik kabarstaan lako lai aayea haan,,,

main ik kabarstaan lako lai aayea haan,,,

22 Dec 2009

Jassi Sangha
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hun ki kita jawe fer....

23 Dec 2009

gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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kujh na karin meri maan ,,,, j changa laggea tan rakh layi j na changa laggea mainu dass d main del kar dau... ha ha ha

24 Dec 2009

Jassi Sangha
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yaar eh ki aa?? tusi edit kita sab kuch.. i can not reply to any post like that.. lol

27 Dec 2009

gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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ho gea c jithe zameer takk gehne,,, jithe imaan vik rea c... main otho ik be-imaan lako leyaea haan... sajjan de shehar gea jithe mera pyar vik rea  c...

othon main do roohan da kar visal lako lai aayea haan...

dharti ne vekhi pehli parwaz aadmi d,,, fer eh v vekhea k asmaan vik rea c...

tutt gea mera v bharam k pyar mull nahin vikda...

ese daro k mera ishq v kite gehne na ho jawe...

                            main tutte dil da ik armaan lako lai aayea haan ,,,

                       kal nu pai jaani ae kismat likhaun layi v rishwat d lod... jo mere layi bharega main oh ik dhanwan lako lai aayea haan...

                             dar pai gea c mainu k marn pchhon do hath zameen milgei ya nahin... ese layi main ik kabarstaan lako lai aayea haan,,,

main ik kabarstaan lako lai aayea haan,,,

27 Dec 2009

gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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ajj jdon apne khali kamre ch wadea main,
meri hi kalam mere sohen aa k khlo gayi,
kehandi ik jhalak wekh k tu duniya d kismat likh ditti...ajj aake apne te teri zuban kiyun chup ho gayi,
ditta tain har bande nu jo ohne mangea,,,
par eh tan dass,kismat to tere te aa k kehri galti ho gayi,,,
bade warke fole ne tain duniya de...
bade bhed khole ne tain lokan de,,,
ajj apna koi "kirda" hi warka fol...
ajj lai aai kismat gall tere te,,,
ajj kise panne to tan apni zindagi d kitab khol...
tainu wasta ae tere rabb da,,,
ajj apna na sahi apne ateet da hi koi fikra bol,,,
inna sun main sochan vich pai gea,,,
kita c wada na ateet folan da kise nu,,,
sochda wa... ajj kiwe o kita sauda mehanga mainu pai gea,,,
kade ohde naal hundea duniya d lod nahin c,,,
ajj duniya nal ea par fer v dil nu kiyun lagda k main kalla reh gya,,,
ajj v takkda haan bull ohde,,,
sabh to pyari muskurahat c oh,,,
ki karan tareef ohdi yaro,,,
kale baddlan d gadgadahat c oh,,,
mannaya k bolan laggi betahasha hundi c oh,,,
par ik punneya da chann...te chann nu baatan paundi ik chup ch pasri rat,,,
te ose rat ch pyar d chhank di aahat c oh,,,
tassalli,,,na kade mili...na milni kise nu,,,
par fer v is bhajjdi...ik dooje to dardi duniya de wich ,,,mere dil nu rahat c oh...
rehandi c mere naina ch,,,bhavien door ni c jandi kade,,,
par kehna eh v galat nahin k mere layi zindagi d bujharat c oh...
badi aadat c ohnu kehan d,,,"likh k dawan" dhillon tere to jaan war dea,,,
tu aakhein tere layi eh duniyan tak visar deyan,,,
par ik sama aayea ohda likheya ik ik parnote jhoottha pai gea,,,
duniya tan wari ohne "par mera pyar duniya de wich e aa gya,,,"
kade ohde ch wikhdi c duniya...te ajj duniya nal mere,,,
par khaure dil nu kiyun lagda k main ajj ikalla reh gya,,,main ajj ikala reh gya...
hukum kita c meri kalam ne,,,
kujh apne ware bol ...kite apni v kitab khol...
tu hi dass hun main ki bolan,,,ohto lukeya dass kehra bhed kholan,,,
duniya jandi ea meri zindagi d har swer da salam ohde nawen ea,,,
dhilon d kalam da har ik kalam ohde nawen ea,,,
ban ni tan hai ik chhoti jehi zindagi d kitab,,,
"oh "simar..." ea" os kitab da sirlekh ...ohde nawen ea,,,
zindagi d shuruat maa d "kukho" hoi c,,, par zindagi d aakhri sham ohde naawe ea,,,"

27 Dec 2009

gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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kal main tere ch apni parchhai wekhi c...

                       badi dhundali jehi, mitti nal bhari hoi...

khaure kinne hi tufana cho langhdi hoi...hauli hauli uppar aundi...,

                    main tere chehre te apne guroor d uchai wekhi c,

                      Main kujh v karan made da mada e rea...

          par pehli war landhi umar d... tere chehre te apni achhai wekhi c ....

                                gauh nal takkea tan shaq jeha pai gea k kaun sach hai te kaun nakal,,,

                                           te odon mainu yakeen hoyea k tu sach hain te main nakal jadon...

                              Main pehli war tere naina ch apne ishq d sachai wekhi c ...     

29 Dec 2009

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Bahut wadhiya 22 g. U can post poetry in punjabi poetry section its better than this fourm

29 Dec 2009

gumnaam rah te badnaam rahgeer dhillon
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shukriya bai dassan layi dhannwad main zaroor karunga

29 Dec 2009

ROBIN PANNU
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khoob likhaya janab ....sire aa bai ...

25 Feb 2010

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