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goldy

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ਕਦੇ ਕਦੇ

ਕਦੇ ਕਦੇ ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਰੁੱਸ ਜਾਨ ਨੂ ਦਿਲ ਕਰਦਾ ਹੈ ,,,,
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ਏਹੀ ਸੋਚ ਕੇ ਰੁੱਕ ਜਾਣਾ ਹਾ...ਕੀ ਤੇਨੂ ਤਾ ਮਨਾਨਾ ਵੀ ਨਹੀ ਆਂਦਾ......

13 Oct 2014

JAGJIT SINGH

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A fine piece of micro poetry, I would call it.

Like writer like work...I mean Goldy writes golden one liner.

Credits bai ji. Bahut sohna !

Thnx for sharing...

13 Oct 2014

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Mundya vichariya nu kithy rusna onda a, a tan grls ka km hi aa

14 Oct 2014

goldy

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28 Oct 2014

sukhpal

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very well written,........

jeo veer

hor vi khubb likho,..........parhde raho,.....likhde raho

sahitik saanjh banai rakho,...........

zindabaad

05 Mar 2015