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ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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ਕਰਵਾ ਚੌਥ.........

zindagi di bhajj-daur ch thakki.......

farzaan te ehsannan de boj thalle dabbi........

ghar,pati te bcheyaan ch vandi hoi aurat lyi.....

kal karva chauth hai.....

hai t eh dina vrga din hi.

par fr v pta nahi q..

sade desh di masum aurat...

paaldi hai is din de khaas hon da bhrm.......

lgg jaandi hai...

kinne din pehlaan hi...

kach vicg rishteyaan de arth tlashan..

t laal rang ch wfaa di mehk labhn.......

o bholi ki jaane....

k jinna lyi o tyagdi hai ann jal....

o raatan nu ghar partde ne.....

doshi akhaan t gandhli soch lyi..

jo kise na kise mor-chaurahe t.....

koonjaan da saah ghutn da sbab bnde ne.......

saal bhr udeekdi hai o..

mehdi nal "usda" naam hath t likhaun lyi..

par ki pta lgda hai....

kdo agla apne man t kise hor da naam likh.

usnu ik kagz de tukre naal parcha dinda hai.

rasoi da kamm-dhandha niber..

roshni vle bazaaran ch ghummdi eh aurat.

mainu kise devi ti ght nahi lgdi.

jisnu sdeevi muskuraht da sraap mileya hai.....

chann di udeek ch...

baatan nal dil parchaundi eh lado.....

kite sooraj vaang laal-surkh bhaambhran ch

bl t nahi jayegi.........

eh taukhla mainu roz khaanda hai.......

shaala rabb mehr kre....

is chiri di vi kadr pve.......

jo kdi eh kdi oh vrat rakhdi-2.....

aap ik pyaas ho jandi hai....

kal karva chauth hai jis lyi...

oh aurat bhut masum hai........

o nahi samjhdi.........

lfzaan de bhanak jungle.

t muskaanan de vaaran nu.......

o t bs jaandi hai...........

reeti-rivaajan di chakki ch pisna..............

t kamm krdeyyaan-2.......

veeleen ho jana...............




25 Oct 2010

Nimarbir Singh
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realy great


ਵਾਹ ਜੀ ਵਾਹ...!!!  ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਕਮਾਲ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਤੁਸੀ.

..ਮੇਰੇ ਕੋਲ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਨਹੀਂ ਜਿੰਨਾ ਨਾਲ ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਤੇ ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਇਸ ਰਚਨਾਂ ਦੀ ਤਾਰੀਫ਼ ਕਰ ਸਕਾਂ...
ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਇਹ ਰਚਨਾਂ ਪੜ ਕੇ ਮੈਨੂ ਪੰਜਾਬ ਦੇ ਨਾਮਵਰ ਗੀਤਕਾਰ ਦੇਬੀ ਮਖਸੂਸਪੁਰੀ ਜੀ ਦੇ ਬੋਲ ਯਾਦ ਆ ਰਹੇ ਹਨ...

ਰੋ-ਰੋ ਜੂਨ ਹੰਢਾਵਾਂ ਮੇਰੇ ਸੁੱਖ ਨਾਂ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਭਾਗ ਵੇ ਲੋਕੋ
ਮੈਂ ਨਾਰੀ ਹਿੰਦੋਸਤਾਨ ਦੀ...ਵੇ ਮੈਂ ਨਾਰੀ ਹਿੰਦੋਸਤਾਨ ਦੀ

ਸਦੀਆਂ ਤੋਂ ਮੈਂ ਲੁੱਟੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਕੌਣ ਸੁਣੇ ਫ਼ਰਿਆਦ ਵੇ ਲੋਕੋ
ਮੈਂ ਨਾਰੀ ਹਿੰਦੋਸਤਾਨ ਦੀ...ਵੇ ਮੈਂ ਨਾਰੀ ਹਿੰਦੋਸਤਾਨ ਦੀ

25 Oct 2010

Nirvair Singh
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great

 

bahut hi sohna likheya...gall bilkul sire la ti ke is marad pradhan samaj vich aurtaan nu sir uchha chakkan nahi ditta ja reha.....sahi keha tusi..


jionde vassde raho..eda hi likhde raho..thankx for sharing

25 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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kya baat ae g.. kmaal kar diti.. jio g jio

25 Oct 2010

jassi hayer
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bahut khoob likhiya g tusi, tuhadi kalm di aur tuhade talent di daad deni bandi hai par is duniya vich bahut sarey changay bandey v han, har koi bewafa aur bedard nahi hunda

25 Oct 2010

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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hatss offf

bahaut sohna likheya g.........

 

keep writing n keep sharing

25 Oct 2010

Harkiran Jeet  Singh
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hatss offf

        hatss offf

                 hatss offf

 Bahut Bahut Shandar ji........................

26 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
ਕੁਕਨੂਸ
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thanks a lot..........

@ NIMAR,NIRVAIR,AMANDEEP,HARJIT: thanks a lot ji.......

                                                           tuhaada bhut bhut shukriya.......

@JASSI: bina shakk..jo tuc keha sch hai...pr human tendency a k...o fullan di mehk nalon ,kandeyaan di chobh nu vadh shidatt naal mehsus krda a..thanks a lot for praise.....

26 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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thanks........

@HARKIRAN: BHUT BHUT MEHARBAANI........

26 Oct 2010

Amrinder Singh
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Awesome....!!!!!

 

lajawab....!!! bahut khoob.....

26 Oct 2010

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