sab ton pehli gal mera aap sab kavita likhan waleaan naal kkoi vair nahi hai....par kujh galllaan main kavita baare jarur saanjhiaan karniaan chahundi haan.......
"kavita nu prerna di baanii manneaa jaanda hai....isdi jo parkiirti hai......usde 2 khaas lacchan hunde han...:-----
1. sacchaai (sincerity)
2. aap-muharataa (spontaneity)
so....kavita diaan bhaawnaawaan da zindgi diaan vaastviik bhaawnaawaan naalon anter hunda hai....kavita vich pesh ehsaas "saahittiik" roop wale hunde ne.....sambhaavi hunde ne......ehnaa di aapni ik khaas parbhaavaatmiikta hundi hai....etthe es gal tussin sab dhyaan devo ki PRERNE kkoi BHAAVAATMIIK THEME YAAN MANOBHAAWAAN NU PARGATAAUN DI KKOI DAGGDI-MAGGHDI ICCHAA HI AAPNE AAP VICCH "KAAV-RACHNA" LAYI KAAFI NAHIN HUNDIII.....
KAVITA DI SAFFALTA LAYI "TECHNIQUE" DI BOUHAT MAHATAVPPURAN HAI....SIRF TECHNIQUE HI KISE vi kavi di saffalta da saarthakk adhaaar hai....
( main aap ji sab likhaariaan nu jiina nu kavita likhan da shounk hai... kkehna chahundi haan ki... aapni kavita di takneek vall vi vadhere dhyaan dein...eh sab kvaiotawaan jo etthe likhiaan jaandiaan or saanjhiaan kitiaan jaandiaan ne... bouhte pakhaan ton sampuran ni hundiaan... yaan te SURJIT PAATAR MAARKA...YAAN PHIR BATALVI DE SHABDAAN DA .......SANJOG....)
IK SIYAANI NAKKAL NU HI MOULIIKTA AAKHEAA JANDA HAI... SO.. MOULIIKTA HONII JARURI HAI.... SIRF PAATAR YAAN SHIV BANAN VALL DHYAAN NA DEWO JI.....)
