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| Kikar da full |
Main kikkar da full, Kikkar joga reh gaya, Aaya hawa da ik bulla, Ajj kikkar to vi leh gaya, Teri eni hi si zindgi, Karke tabah sanu keh gaya, Meri saadgi te kise nu taras na aaya, Chahe lakh tufaana naal kheh gaya, Bas apne hanju sut sut ke dariya ik bna leya, Ajj os dariya de vich khud hi veh gaya, Dukh, peeda sab julm ruttan de, hass hass ke seene seh gaya, Dil pathar bna ke ik thaa tikeya reha, ret te likheyan wang paniyan naal dheh gaya, Aayi maut rani ta chup chaap jeha ho ke, SATTI kabran de vich pai gaya... Main kikkar da full, Kikkar joga reh gaya.
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15 Apr 2010
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its sad... but bahut wadhiya 22 g... specially the first lines...!!
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15 Apr 2010
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 speechless..........bahaut vadiya g!!!
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15 Apr 2010
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bht khoob but be positive!!!!!!!!
write positive!!!!!!!!!!!
kikkar de full kyi drakhtan ton chnge aa... kyian nu sirf knde ee lggde aa...
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15 Apr 2010
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Meri saadgi te kise nu taras na aaya, Chahe lakh tufaana naal kheh gaya...
bahut khoob veere...keep it up
aas hai aidan hi share krde rahoge....
with warmth,
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15 Apr 2010
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| ssa 22 |
kalm da eh kmaal, kmaal ae 22 ji
keep shairing
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15 Apr 2010
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o master ji
hun hasauan d jagah ruwaun da sochea hai ?
bahut sohni rachna hai,udaas mann d vithea
samjuga ohi ,jehne eh vithea aapne pindey te handae hovegi
asin dardan de darya ,ek dukh hor sahi
satti ji life tan oh game kheiddi rahi hai sade naal
bhanda bhandariya kina ku bhaar
ek muthi chak lai duji tyar
punjabi ch type kar k add karo pls
fe eh hor doongey arthan naal padi jaugi
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15 Apr 2010
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Thanks ami 22, amandeep ji, lakwindr, manpreet 22.. @arindr rachna pasand karn layi shukriya.
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15 Apr 2010
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@jassi bebe de nak thale ta kuch aunda e ni... +++++++++++++++++++++++ aah chak positive likhta hun theek aa.. @ hardeep ji dhanwaad punjabi ch type karn layi mleetrni di duty la dene aa.
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15 Apr 2010
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