ohde jurma da rab aisa faisla sunawe,

   main howa akhri saha te oh miln mainu awe,

mere sine ute hoe hon jakhm hazaran,

   mera dekh dekh hal ohda dil bhar jawe,

mainu bukl ch lai k oh bhuba mar rowe,

   bs mere utte ena haq oh jtawe,

jiwe rusdi c oh pehla nikki nikki gallon,

   aj fer kise gallon mere nal rus jawe,

oh rondi rondi kahe tenu kde nai bulaona,

   ohda sun k jawab mera dil tut jawe,

eh karm diya khedan ohnu kiwe smjawa,

   ohnu chhad k main jawa dil mera v na chawe,

ohnu dekhdea meri sari lang jae umar,

   mera akhri oh saah ena lamha ho jawe,

bs puri kr de a meri akhri tammana

   meri lash nu oh apni chunni nal dhak jawe,

main awangi udeeki menu agle janm ch,

    oh jandi jandi fer jhootha lara jeha jawe,

ohde samne mere naina de chirag bujh jan,

    ohdi punea nu masea da daag lag jawe,

matha ragd ragd mange oh lakh fariada,

   pr ohda dildar kde mud k na awe,,,

                kde mud k na awe.....................!!!!

sohna likheya

THANX G.............

MENU KISE NE SAAL KU PEHLAN SMS KITI C EH RACHNA...????...??..?

wah ...o bhai saab owner g kithe sute pye o tusi....its v.shamefull to yu k tusi ik galat bande nu ni opehchaan sakey hale tak......eh v meri hi likhi a...........n j is bare detaidl info chahidi a ta eh link ch ja k eh comm. join kr k vekhlo .sb clear hoju....bahadar bai g ne thik kea ..sms ch pri hou ..eh boht pehla di copied a ..metho galti eh hoi k main eh likhn saar text karti c..n name change ho k frwd hundi gyi..n jd 2 saal bad orkut te payi ta v ehi swaal utheya.......

http://www.orkut.co.in/Main#Community?cmm=96309232

http://www.orkut.co.in/Main#CommMsgs?cmm=94159328&tid=5429110791762255669

n es link te sare proof de nal a..pr es lyi comm.join krni pyu otherwise eh link open ni hona......

vaise menu owner kolo ki bohti aas nyi co operation di.....kyunki j ohna koi step uthona hunda ta pehla wale vivaad te hi utha dinde....pr ohna shayd jaruri ni smjea.......n aa bhai saab da v shukria jihna fer copy maarli..........jeonde rwo punjabi de vaarso...

n es link te sare proof ne..bt ehde lyi comm.join krni peni a..edan open ni hona eh link.....

http://www.orkut.co.in/Main#CommMsgs?cmm=52888266&tid=5433219172794015541

Hi Khushal,

You are not the only one jisdiyaa poems copy paste hoyiyaa ne... sadiyaa vi hundiyaa ne and we are living with it....  Once you post on internet these are vulnerouable to theft... we are living with it and you have to live with it...  No one has that much time ke ja ja ke dekhe ke kisne ih sabh ton pehla post kiti hai...  u r just saying here go and search u wud find a lot of links with same poem....  have a look at these links kithe kithe ja ke raula pavega:

http://forum.lovepatiala.com/f15/and-2606-and-2632-and-2562-and-2617-and-2635-and-2613-and-2622-and-2562-and-2566-and-2582-and-2608-and-2624-and-2616-and-2622-and-2617-and-2622-and-2562-and-2596-and-2631-and-2569-and-2617-and-2606-and-2623-and-2610-and-2595-and-2606-and-2632-and-2600-and-2626-and-2672-and-2566-and-2613-and-2631-a-5456/

http://www.forum.grarri.com/index.php?/topic/5725-%E0%A8%AE%E0%A9%88%E0%A8%82-%E0%A8%B9%E0%A9%8B%E0%A8%B5%E0%A8%BE%E0%A8%82-%E0%A8%86%E0%A8%96%E0%A8%B0%E0%A9%80-%E0%A8%B8%E0%A8%BE%E0%A8%B9%E0%A8%BE%E0%A8%82-%E0%A8%A4%E0%A9%87-%E0%A8%89%E0%A8%B9-%E0%A8%AE%E0%A8%BF%E0%A8%B2%E0%A8%A3-%E0%A8%AE%E0%A9%88/

http://forum.desicomments.com/archive/index.php/t-21891.html

Avein aa ke owner naal aukhe haun naal koi farak nahi paina...  world is like this and we are living in it... 

We know this is wrong thing kise di poem chori karna...  par kita ki ja sakda hai.... jado pata lagda hai, we can condemn only...

i knw brother .......main eh kithe mention kita k kalliyan meria hundiya ne ...n is ch owner nal aukhe hon wali ki gal a....menu puchn da hak a ta main puchea ..tuhanu ki takleef ho ryi a es nal......nale owner da frz ban.da eho jia problems nu sort out karna.......punjabi punjabi raula paun nal hi ni kuj change hon lgea bhai saab..j kuj wakeya hi krn de ichuk ho ta eh cheejan rokniya pengiya...

n 2ndly link sirf proof lyi paya c...j tuade kol tym nai hega check krn lyi ta na kro bcos eh link tuade lyi specialy ni paya gya ...eh sareya lyi hai.....

eh gal personly na lena g ...mera matlab sirf eh hai k eho j loka nu ignour na kita jawe.....chup rehn nal ehojia activities vadhngiya......n aapan j punjabi nu represent krn lyi kathe hoye aa ta its our duty k ehna galan wal dheyaan dita jawe.....apan ethe sirf apniya poems hi ni post krde..asli maksad ta punjabi boli nu represent krn da a....so umid hai ap sath deyoge......rabb rakha