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Ashish Sharma
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Mera Hanju Jdo'n Vehn Lagga

Mera hanju jdon vehn lagga
Mainu ehe kehn lagga
Main tan veere vehn lagga'n
Par hun hor naa vahaayi'n tu

Eh tan nishani ne buzdilan di
Eh pshaan nhi hundi khushdilan di
Sama Aukdda'n-Musibatta'n da
Hass k langhaayi'n tu.....

Manneya k hassna teri,
Problem da koi hall nhi....
Tu tan darri jana ainve hi
Shera aiddi v koi gall nhi....
Vekh aundiyan musibtan,
Naa ainve ghabraayi'n tu....

MERA HANJU JDO'N VEHN LAGGA
MAINU EHE KEHN LAGGA
MAIN TAN VEERE VEHN LAGGA'N
PAR HUN HOR NAA VAHAAYI'N TU........

25 Nov 2014

sukhpal singh
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weldone,...........kafi khull ke likhea ,.............azaad kalam chon nikli ik khubsurat kavita hai eh,............likhde raho parhde raho,...........hor vi khubb likho,............keep it up veer.

06 Dec 2014

Ashish Sharma
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thanx sukhpal veer...jrur meri ehi koshosh rahu k apni maa boli d seva kara....

 

10 Feb 2015

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unique.. bht vdia likha.. azaad khyal te khulli soch vicho hi kuj nve lafz jnam lende han..carry on
p.s. ro v lena chaida kde kde.. its not that bad
12 Mar 2015

Ashish Sharma
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thanx tanvir....

15 Mar 2015

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