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Lakhwinder Singh
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ਨਜ਼ਮ

nt mine bt i love dis

 

ਉਹ ਸਾਰਾ ਦਿਨ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਹੈ
ਕਾਗ਼ਜ਼ 'ਤੇ ਨਹੀਂ
ਅੰਗੂਠੇ 'ਤੇ
ਹੱਥ ਦੀ ਪਹਿਲੀ ਉਂਗਲ ਨਾਲ
ਜਦੋਂ ਕਾਗਜ਼ 'ਤੇ ਲਿਖਣ ਲੱਗਦੈ
ਅੰਗੂਠੇ 'ਤੇ ਲਿਖੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਰੌਲਾ ਪਾਉਣ ਲੱਗ ਜਾਂਦੇ ਹਨ
''ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਲਿਖ
ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਲਿਖ''
ਇਸ ਘੜਮੱਸ 'ਚ ਬੌਂਦਲਿਆ
ਉਹ ਕਾਗ਼ਜ਼ ਕੋਰਾ ਛੱਡ
ਉਠ ਖੜ੍ਹਦੈ
ਉਂਝ ਉਹ ਸਾਰਾ ਦਿਨ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਰਹਿੰਦੈ!

 

regards,

03 Apr 2010

Harmail Preet listen me on fm bathinda 101mh
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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂ਼ਬ ਲਿਖਿਐ ਲਖਵਿੰਦਰ ਜੀ, ਸੱਚਮੁੱਚ ਅਜਿਹੀ ਸਥਿਤੀ ਚੋ ਕਦੇ ਕਦੇ ਨਾ ਅਸੀਂ ਸਾਰੇ ਹੀ ਗੁ਼ਜ਼ਰਦੇ ਹਾਂ।

03 Apr 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bhaut KHOOB veerey..!!

03 Apr 2010

Jassi Sangha
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bht khoob..

03 Apr 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut khoob 22 g...!!!

 

04 Apr 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bahut khoob veer

04 Apr 2010

A G
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maasha allah...kinna wadia likhde o tusi.

04 Apr 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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sohna likheya veer Good Job

05 Apr 2010

Gursaab Mal
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kya baat bai g ,,,,,,,,bahut vadia 

05 Apr 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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wah !!!! lakhi kamaal kar diti

 

mera veer tan bahla he zindgi nu kareeb to parkhan de samrath ho gaya hai,

 

like bawa balwant and s. s. meesha

 

lakhi main tan eh kahungi k eh shahkaar rachna hai,

 

jado shabdan nu sunan d taaqat aa jaaye na bande kol,

 

tan oh sookham bhaavan wale insaana d ginti vich aa jaanda hai

 

god bless you lakhi,

 

teri pugg wang teri zindgi v khoobsoorat ho jaavey....

 

 

05 Apr 2010

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