apne bachpan de dina nu yaad karna sabh ton pyara anibhav hunda hai..jisnu tusi bahut achhi tra likheya hai..very nice

nice one hai ji...

SIMRAT TE ARINDER G

COMMENTS LAYEE BHUT BHUT DHANWAD

Very nice wording Sunil ji!

Sukriya gurinder veer G

Fati te paaye poorne mainu chete aunde ne,
jad sajjan mere bachpan da koi geet sunaunde ne.

sunil veer g bahut vadiya , jindgi de dudh varge suche din chete karaa ditte.

SADI SITE TON POEMS CHORI HO KE  (UNP.CO.IN) TE JA RAHIYA HAN

HERE IS LINK

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Arsh Bai ..... kuj nai hunda ....

choran di chal jyda lammi nai hundi

eh poem mainu mere ek frnd ne sms kiti c .. sayad ohnu v kise ne krti hove...

bahut sohna likheya sunil g.........bachpan de haseen dina nu bahut sohna kagaj te uttareya a.......shukriya.ih sabh pard k mere bacpan diya yada tajiyan h gyian ne.

BHUT BHUT SUKRIA RAJWINDER G....