ik death da scene pesh kita  hai jee kuch dekh k kuch bhog k

Koi maar maar dahare rowe

koi lag khoonje hanju poonjda E

koi kra reha chup rondea nu

koi luk luk hanju peewnda E

koi kare gal teri zindagi di taur di

te koi kafan tera pea seewnda E

jehre tan nu karde c salama loki

oh pea lakra te agg udeekda E

koi kare gal maut teri tarafdi di

koi soche bin tere paina jeevna E

sab aaye nibhaun duniadari ne

tere pyarea ne bus dukh peevna E

sari dunia wang mere anni hi hai

kine chad moh khuda layi jeevna E

jatinder ji kavita pad k koi aapna aakhan sahmney aa gaya,jo pata nae waheguru de rangan ch kithey hai. har time naal hundey hoye v faani sansaar ch dikhda nae.

bahut bhavuk likhea hai.aaj ikaley beh k khoob ro leya.

bht he bhavuk jeha visha aa te bht he bhavuk scene..hun takk rabb di kirpa aa k eh mahaul dekhya ni par ajj tuhadi kavitha pdke feel kr lya..try to pen something on hanju or akhan..plz.. n i ll wait when u ll post,,,yaad rkhna...looking forward for ur next post ..

Bahut wadhiya likheya 22. Akhan nam ho gayiyan. Great one.

bahut hi bhavuk kar den wali rachna e..............ehde lai appreciation bas ih hi e k jo v read karda hai usdian akhan ch hanju aa jande ne , sabh nu apna koi khoia yaad aa janda hai ........... heart touched