sat shri akal dosto

 

auratan da din bhaav women's day da bada shor sharaba hai aaj kal. main eh topic pata nae kyu likh dita, aivien free beithi c kam te ,tan laga chalo pen nu kheichal dayiye. pasand aaya tan v shukriya ,nae aaya tan v meharbani dostan d.....

 

kal  aurat divas kursi te sajj aapna din mana reha c

badi sharda naal neita ji bhashan de rahe c

lokan nu mufat da raashan de rahe c

ek bibi d chunni sarki

neita ji dian aakhan vich bhukh chamki

te mann lalchaya

ohdar bibi da dil ghabraya

par sab adol chup chaap aurat divas te bhashan ch leen c

daftari babuan ne v aurat divas manaya

sathi bibian nu cake khavaea

oh sirf ohna de mann parchave lae hun

eh ehsaas karwaea

par fe v

aurat divas tan manaea

ese din kise bibi da paras kho k chor bhajea

aurat divas os de magar gajjea

bibi daud k thaney gayi

thanedaar c sharaab naal rajjea

bibi ne guhaar lagae

thanedaar ne aapni aukaat dikhae

bibi boli bhai aaj aurat divas hai

aaj tan sunn mera dukh

thanedaar hasea

oh hor hasea

kehnda bibi aurat divas chor magar kyu na nasea?

hun bibi sochan nu majboor c

aakhir os nu v tan aurat hon da garoor c

oh kahli naal ghar nu aayi

pati nu vithiaa khol sunae

os ne sab sunea

mann muskaea

aurat divas aapni sigrate de dhonye vich udaea

bibi khamosh khadi c

shayad butt hon da dawa bhar rahi c

mard to shuru ho k mard tak he tan reh gayi c

phir oh hasi

kamlean wang sarkarey darbarey nasi

othey tan mahul hor c

sab paasey shor c

raj sabha nae

eh tan pashuan vich aa gayi c

aurat divas de kapde paadey

os nu aapmanit kita

eh sab ho sakda hai

kyonki

pashu nu soji nae hundi

haar humb bibi ghar nu aayi

chulle uttey daal chadae

lao ji hun aurat divas manaea

cooker d siti te bibi bhangra paaya

injh aurat divas manaea

sadian to mannda aa reha hai

mannda injh he rahiga

yaaro main nae kadi manaea

mainu tan kadi cheita v nae aaya

maaf karna

mainu tan kadi cheita v nae aaya

Hmmmmmm. Bahut khoob hardeep ji.. Bakhubi kiha. Samaaj de muh te chaperh.. Jeooooooo

thanx satti ji . pata nae kal kyu feel ho reha c k asin aurat zaat do parts ch vandey hoye haan. jo bahut high society nu belong kardian hun,women's day sirf ohna lae he hunda hai,asin lok tan aivien roongey ch auandey haan,coz sadi soch ohna d soch naal meil nae khandi.

 

 

 

 

 

 

bahut wadhiya hardeep ji..... umeed karde haan... changey din aunge...

Sahi keha mam tusi,,aurat nu do parts ch wandeya hoia hai,

 

par aurat ne khud nu v wndeya hoia hai,,,

,ek high society aurat lai ek low caste gareeb aurat,,,,aurat nahi,,,sirf ek kam karn wali ja safai karn wali  hai,,,stage te lamba lamba bhashan den walia women's organisations dia head ,,nijji zindagi ch aurat da he shoshan kardia ne,,fer chahe oh nooh de roop wich howe,,naukar de roop ch,,ja kise hor sub-ordinate roop ch,,,

Feminism sirf matro-polition cities tak he seemat hai,,,rural and undevelop areas ch ehda naamo nishan nahi...

 

aapne bahut krari chot kiti hai kavita rahi,,,ek socially oriented poet d responsibilty nibhai hai..

mai kuj galt bol gya howa,,khiam da jachak haa

khush raho

thanx amrinder ji.

 

changey dina d umeed te shayad aurat ne compromise karne chadne shuru kite hun. hun lagda hai k aapni jimevaari lai layiye k aap es cheej ch nae paina,sachi kuch saukhey v mehsoos karida hai.

par aje delhi sachin boh dooor hai.

 

thanx narinder ji.

 

asal ch aam gharelu aurat nu tan women day d date v nae pata honi. mainu v sure nae,coz main v sunea he hai k eh din hai. mainu kise ne wish kiti c and main hairaan c k es din barey na meri biji nu pata,na meri mom nu, na he sadi kamwali nu. fe eh din kehdian auratan lae banea hai and kaun manuanda hai.

 

kal job te thoda thoda time milda reha and mainu pata nae kyu es din to chid jahi hai ,so likhna shuru kar dita. par mainu kise reply d umeed nae c,coz mainu laga k es topic te meri soch kuch zyada he pessimist hai.par tuhade vichaar jaan k dilon khushi hoe.thanx.

 

tuhadi har gal naal main sehmat haan. asal ch tusi gal kahi v theek hai. aurat da soshan karauan vich aurat he sab to main kaaran hai.

 

narinder ji asal ch aapni society vich kai auratan ne standard d defination alag bana rakhi hai.

ehdar v dekhde haan k indian ladies bahut khush hundian hun j ohna dian kudian ghat kapde pa k ghumdian firdian hun. meri friend d he family hai,jis vich ehnu standard mithea jaanda hai.

par sadey warge khooh de daddu kadi v change nae ho sakde. sanu ehdan he lagda rehnda k sanu dekh k he gorean ne punjabi d pehchaan bana pauni hai. so j oh punjabian lae changa dekhan tan sadi auan wali generation lae theek hovega.

 aapan har gal ch mard nu doshi nae mann sakde. aurat nu aapne asool sahi rakhne paingey. society vich aapni image clear karni pavegi,jis lae shayad aje sama aaya nahi.

 

 

bahut hi vdiya Hardeep ji...

koi lafz nahi a mere kol is koshish lyi.....

tusi te bahut vdiya likh lende ho..

keepitup..

regards,

Hanji sehmat haa..

women's day d starting baare ta menu nahi pta,,

but feminism baare thoda jaanda haa..

doosre wishav yudh to baad,,,society wich aurat d raajnitak te smajik na-brabari wirud awaz buland hon laggi,,,fer early 60's ch es ravolution nu feminism da name de ditta gya..esda mukh fayda western countries nu hoya,,jive aap foreign ho te mai v,,ethe wekh lao aurat kol kinne haq ne,,te aurat nu pta hai k ki han eh haq,,kinjh use karne ne,,,

india wich v khair improve hoya ,,but still,,,bahut kujh hona ajje baqi hai..

hopefully sade smaj d sochani ch badlaav aavega..

te baqi gal reply d es poem lai,,

society nu improve karn wali har soch nu sir niva k slaam,,,

khush raho!

ji narinder ji ,england d safrajet movement ne aurat de haqan d gal shuru kiti

and aurat baradari haqan d galat defination le beithi.

 

khair hope for best.