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Satwinder  Satti
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Joban rutte marna

Sat shri akaal dosto.. ajj bade dina baad kuch likheya hai..

2 din pehla shiv da ik geet sun reha c te fir baad ch gungunaun lagga ta kuch lines banan lag payiyan..

Fir ohna nu shabda de roop vich likh dita…

Eh rachna shayad mere khyalan ch maut to baad di hai kise de naam…

Shiv diyan layina layian ne ohna de mukable ta kuch vi nahi haan fir vi ik koshish hai..

Je koi galti ho jave ta maaf karma…

 

 

Alwida yaaro hun tur hi gaye haan,

Galti hoi ta maaf kari,

 aivein na nindna loka wangu,

 thoda jeha insaaf kari.

Jandi rooh nu gal naal la lai,

Aivein kahto hai larhna,

Asa ta joban rutte marna….

 

Kabar meri te kapda rakh ke,

Os te mera naam likhi,

Fir jo kehna hovega,

Chup karke paigaam likhi,

Chaar chufere veerani dekh ke,

Jara vi n darna,

Asa te joban rutte marna…..

 

Agg mere jism nu sarhegi,

Eh ta ohda hakk hunda,

Haddiyan nu ganga vich vahauna,

Eh jism da pakh hunda,

Mere waang pata ni kinneyan ne,

Ishque di galiyan vich hai sarhna,

Asa te joban rutte marna….

 

Meri rooh di shanti khatir,

Fir mandran, guruduareyan ch honi arzoi,

Par SATTI de jism di raakh,

Tenu pukaaru dhukhdi hoi,

Chale jaawange sab ghara nu,

Na kol mere kise kharhna,

Asa te joban rutte marna….

Asa te joban rutte marna….

 

Satwinder Satti.

19 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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je main sirf kavitaa yaa geet de taur te dekhaan.. tan bahut sohna likheya veer....

great job.....

 

but i wish you all the best in ur life... i wish you get whatever you want.......

keep rocking...!!

19 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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jado thoda upset hunda haan ta aah khilara jeha paa dena hunda haan

us din eda da hi kuch mood c.

but now good.. everything is fine..

thanks for always there for me.

tuhade warge dosta diyan duawan naal ne ta aapa nu koi tension nahi.

19 Mar 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bahut vadhia uprala hai veerey....

 

Our best wishes are always with you....Tention nai lainee koi kade vee

 

Take Care & be happy always..!!

19 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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bhaji ta bahle hi khush ho gaye 3-3 comment post karteTongue out

 

thanks bhaji for blessings

19 Mar 2010

Jassi Sangha
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ah dekhlo balihaar bhaji kinne naal ne tuhade ..3 wari keha uchi uchi..hun tan smjh jao...

as a writing itz good one.. likhia kmaal.. main line jo hai..asin tan joban rutte mrna.. thori adhori lggi j ikk line naal hor hundi gall bn jandi.. but mainu tecnical knowledge hai ni..baki khyaal apni jagah bht wdhiya aa.. be positive veer ..eh ni kahungi k sab miluga .. asha tan sab di ehi hundi aa k sab mile but har kisi ko mukammal jahan nhi milta.. so eh kahungi k usdi rza ch khush rehna sikho ...kyi war kuch kho v bht kuch paa lyida aa te lyi war pa k kuch na payan jeha hunda aa..

writing achhi aa but asal ch negetiev nhi hona..u r a great human wid tons  of humanity.. tuhadi hale bht lodd aa sanu..lolzzzzzzzz

19 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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o ho meri bebe negetive soch nahi hai...

bas khayal ne...

baki rail vi banauni hundi aa ta hi keh rahi hai lod hai lolzzzzzzzzz

19 Mar 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bahut vadhia likhia bai ji ........... bas jo vi khyaal aave ohnu likh dena chahida hai .........udasi nu vi hathiaar di tara use kar laina hi art  hai .......... te tusi kita hai .......bahut vadhia ..........grt job

19 Mar 2010

Jassi Sangha
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ethe v ikk geda laa ee dewan..party0009

19 Mar 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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satti ji sat shri akal

 

satti ji kavita boh sohni likhi hai,ek line main lai k jeevan d sachae roopmaan kar diti hai.awesome.

kavita sohni hovey v kyu na ?, aakhir munda padh likh k sada master laga hai.

 

jivien jivien padi gayi,oveien os cheej nu imagine kardi gayi,jo gharo chale gaye hun,ohna baarey soch k. asliyat tan ehi hai k mitti da mull boh painda ,jado upjau hovey,mar gayean d yan banjar nu koi nae pushda.

hun hor v add karna, padnian hun main.

add kar deina pls,likhian tan boh payian honian hun,oh type kar laina ,jaldi jaldi.

 

aakhir tutt he jana ,kangna kach deaya

19 Mar 2010

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