waise ta mai likhna nahi jaanda,,par ek reader jarur haa,as being a reader eh kavita ch kujh nava nahi lageya,,beshak ehsaas khub ne,,but they are repeated in many other poems,,i may be wrong,,,these are my own perceptions..thanks for sharing
@ Narinder....veer G mainu te aap kavita likhan waarey kujh nahi pata...haan eh waali mainu changi laggi te main share kar ditti, te eh jaruri nahi hunda k har ik cheez sab nu same tarikey naal pasand aavey...
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