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Amit Mittal
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kyonki main vekhya...
lekhka nu vishya di ghaat preshan kardi hai..
sochde ne ki likhye..
par main sochda ha k ki na likha..
bai mere kol ta likhan layi vishyan diya panda ne
sochda pehla kehdi gand khola te kehdi na..
kyonki main apniyan akkha naal BHAARAT da dushit akaar vekhya
kyonki main apniyan akkha naal BHARAT de karamkanti samaj te hasda sara sansaar vekhya..
kade ta akkha bhar aundiyan ne te kade sharam aundi
kade ta haase naal bhushar khid da hai te kade gusse di tareli aundi hai..
kyonki main apniyan akkha naal asli nu nakli te nakli nu asli kehan wala vehlar lawe te dharam de thekedara da parchaar vekhya..
main ethe vekhe ne vehlar mehnatiyan diya ijjtaan naal share aam khilwar karde
par main ethe mehnati majdooran di kupatt te ohna layi hamesha apmaan vekhya..
main ethe vekhe ne anpar gunde paise de jor te sarprasat bande..
par main ethe khushak hadda nu thukka di jhass la la k puttar ni digriyan kara kara k te ant...
ant mitti de diwe banaun te launda apne hi pind da siddu ghumyaar vekhya..
main ethe vekhe ne anpar gundeya nu neteya vajjo stega te sanmaan milde..
par main ethe sarak te bhuka saunda , te ik din leader de kake di motar thalle kuchleya apne hi pind da chajju chamyaar vekhya..
main ethe vekhya hai ik aurat de dil vich apne desh layi kuj karan da sufna..
par main ethe usnu kite na kite hawas da shikaar bande vekhya..
jo ki ja ta jammno pehla mar gayi..
ja fir bhukkiyan najran vich char gayi..
ja fir daaj di agg vich sar gayi..
par fir v kise kadar na payi..
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ki pucheya j mere kol ehne vishe kyo ne??
.....
kyo mainu kade raun , hasa te sharam aundi hai??
.....
kyonki mainu pata ne ajehiya galla
dhanada de chulleya ch pani paun wali gall hai
jis vi gall cho nikliya oh gall dabb ditta gaya
ja fir sidha ja fir nota di pand thalle
.....
ajj eh sare vishe ik prashan ban k reh gaye ne tuhade te mere sahmane ...
ki tusi ik ajehe desh da sirjan karoge....
vishwaas howe jindagi da adhaar jithe
manukhi di howe kadar jithe..
bhaichare da howe har pase pasara
te fir vare koi sarbans sara..
bajurga da howe satkaar jithe
aurta da howe maan jithe..
kheta ch fasla di bharmaar jithe
aao aisi duniya vasayiye sukhi vasda howe punjab jithe.. sukhi vasda howe desh jithe
sukhi vasda howe sansaar jithe....
......
ki tusi mere naal ho????
.....
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AMIT MITTAL

......dedicated to BIRHA K SULTAAN " SHIV KUMAR BATALAWI "
02 Aug 2009

Kulwant Singh
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hanji babeo paa diti pher tusi..........
is kavita nu assi kiven bhul sakde ha
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naal tere mein inj turna
jiven tera hi parchava
mein na kade pani rudna
na mein aag sad jaana
mein tere dil vich vasana
chahai lakh musibattan ne aauna
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02 Aug 2009

Amit Mittal
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ha ji veer ji .....
main sochya kyo na is kavita nu ethe pa dita jawe.. kyonki ethe bohat kuj sikhan nu milda hai....
02 Aug 2009

Amrinder Singh
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nice work veer.


keep it up.. keep writing n posting..
02 Aug 2009

Amit Mittal
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thank u amrinder veer ji...
honsla vadhaun layi...
02 Aug 2009

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