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Karam Garcha

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ajj mann udas hai

kujh pal layi kalla rehan deo aaj mann udaas hai.

inj lagda mainu bulla rahi umran de pyaas hai.

kujh pal layi kalla rehan deo aaj mann udaas hai.

Kyon mann k rub uss nu main ibaadat karda han.

koi khey na lung jaye supneya de hifajat karda han.

opraa jeha lagda rehnda hai jo roon te libaas hai.

kujh pal layi kalla rehan deo aaj mann udaas hai.

khaab mehlan de vekh reha kakh kulli uttey nai.

saun de vich rukh harey hundey kadey patchard ruttey nai.

kyon aakk de kolon rakh layi fal de aas hai.

kujh pal layi kalla rehan deo aaj mann udaas hai.

hai dil kabrai janda nabaz v rukdi jandi hai.

inj lagda "KARAM" de hathon zindgi khusdi jandi hai.

ban maut jad usne tukna bujhani gaman de pyas hai.

kujh pal layi kalla rehan deo aaj mann udaas hai.

19 May 2010

Kahlon Gagandeep

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bahut sohna likhia veer

nice work

19 May 2010

Balihar Sandhu

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Bahut Vadhia veerey...keep it up

19 May 2010

sandeep

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Bahut vadiyaa..22g.....

19 May 2010

Karam Garcha

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thnx

20 May 2010

SIMRAN

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BAHUT KHOOB JI

20 May 2010

Satwinder

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Gud one.

20 May 2010

Amrinder

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nice one 22 g..!!

20 May 2010

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nice

bahut wadiya veer g.

great!!

20 May 2010