ਸ਼ਹੀਦ ਭਗਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਜੀ ਦੇ ਜਨਮ ਦਿਨ 27 ਸੰਤਬਰ ਨੂੰ ਸਮਰਪਿਤ
ਮੇਰੀ ਨਵੀਂ ਰਚਨਾ......

ਸ਼ਹੀਦ ਭਗਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗਾ
ਕੋਈ ਯੋਧਾ ਨਾ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਥਿਆਇਆ
ਗੁੰਗੀ ਬੋਲੀ ਅੰਗਰੇਜ਼ ਸਰਕਾਰ ਨੂੰ
ਜਿਸਨੇ ਸੀ ਆਣ ਜਗਾਇਆ
ਅਵਾਜ ਆਪਣੀ ਬੁਲੰਦ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ
ਓਸ ਨੇ ਬੰਬ ਅਸੇਬਲੀ ’ਚ ਚਲਾਇਆ
ਦੇਸ਼ ਨੂੰ ਅਜਾਦ ਕਰਵਾਉਣ ਲਈ
ਓਸ ਨੋਜਵਾਨਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਨਾਲ ਮਿਲਾਇਆ
ਗਰਮ ਦਲ ਜਿਹਨੂੰ ਆਖਦੀ ਸੀ ਕਾਗਰਸ
ਓਹ ਬਣਿਆ ਓਸ ਦਾ ਸਾਇਆ
ਧਰਮ ਨਿਰਪੱਖ ਦਾ ਸੁਪਨਾ ਸਿਰਜਿਆ
ਜਿਸ ਨੂੰ ਓਸ ਪੂਰ ਚੜਾਇਆ
ਹੱਸ ਕੇ ਲਾੜੀ ਮੌਤ ਨੂੰ ਚੁੰਮ ਗਿਆ
’ਸੋਹਲ’ ਓਹ ਸੱਚਾ ਦੇਸ਼ ਦਾ ਸਰਮਾਇਆ

pathkaan agge gujarish hai ji ki Shaheed Bhagat Singh ji di

date of birth 27,or 28 September bare jo app ji mutabik theek

hove os nu parvaan kar layina ji kioki menu es bare 27 September

di jankari see apda....

Jasbir Sohal

hanji eh v confusion waala mudda e ae.. date waala v..

 

par bahut wadhiya rachna likhi ae iss mauke..

keep writing..!!

Amrinder ji rachna padan layi dhanwad

brother main ik gal sanjhi karna chahouda

haan ki ehi rachna main India community

te payi see os community te mainu pathkan

ne English wich translate karn layi keha te

main koshish karke scrap kiti ghato ghat 90

pathkan de jawab ayee but punjabi deyian

community te os punjab de Shaheed putar

nu padhan di kesi kol vehal hi nahi hai jis

ne apne desh layi kurbani kiti.

bus main hor kujh nahi kehna chahouda....

 

hanji sir... i have seen that...  par shayad othe v mainu response ghat hee laggeya jis hisaab naal orkut te bhagat singh di community de member ne...

 

actually problem eh hai.. ik din ch vich je waahwa content post hunda hove.. generallyusers miss kar jaande ne kujh... ehde waaste i am planning to introduce notfication system so that writer can send notification to his friends..if he has posted a poem or anything

 

Vadhia rachna hai veer G...

ਸ਼ਹੀਦ ਭਗਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਤੇਰੇ ਵਰਗਾ
ਕੋਈ ਯੋਧਾ ਨਾ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਥਿਆਇਆ

 

te jiven Amrinder 22 ne kiha hai k kai waar jyada post ho jaan naal pathak miss kar jaande ne...otherwise veer g Bhagat Singh varge saare shahidan nu te ohna diyan kurbaaniyan noo bhul jaan dee galti jaan bujh k koi nee kar sakda ... Jehrhi kaum Itihas noo bhul jaave oh fir bahuti der duniya de nakshe te nee reh sakdi..!!

 

Jeonde Vasde raho te eho jiha likhde raho te share karde raho.........

sir ji......bohat vadiya likhya tussi.....mere kolo vi miss ho gayi....pata ni kida....keep writing n thanks for sharing

bahut khoob sir ji....... @amrinder veer and balihar veer ji tusi theek kiha hai. Main apni galti manda haan ke mere to miss ho gayi eh poem nahi ta je asi sardar bhagat singh warge shaheeda nu bhul jawange ta sada koi wajood nahi rahega ohna diyan kurbaniyan sadke hi asi azadi nal jee rahe haan. main hath jod ke sare membra to maafi chaunda haan for miss that

Shaheed Bhagat Singh tere varga
koi yodha na menu theiyeaa

Shaheed Bhagat Singh,I have never seen a warrior like you

gungi boli angrej sarkar nu
jisne see aan jagayeaa
You were the one who awakened the deaf and dumb British government

awaaj apni buland karn layi
os ne bamb asembly ch chalyeaa

To make himself heard he threw a bomb in the assembly

desh nu ajaad karvaaoun layi
os ne naujawana nu naal milayieaa

He gave a call to the youngestrs for the freedom of our country

garm dal jihnu akhdi see congress
oh banyea os da sayieaa

He was the shadow of the party to which congress considered garam dal

dharm nirpakh da supna sirjiyeaa
jis nu os poor chadhiyeaa

He saw the deam of secularism and even accomplished it

has ke ladhi maout nu chum gayiaa
'sohal' oh sachaa desh da sarmyieaa

He kissed the death as his bride 'sohal' considers him to be a true legacy of our country

 

Amrinder ji, Balihar ji, Mandeep ji te Satwinder ji aap sab da dhanwad main jo English translation karke India community te rachna payi oh aap sab de ru-b-ru pesh kiti hai.

Baki padhan layi sab pathkaan nu main dil to majboor ho ke likhyea see, ik gal main hor sanjhi karna chahuda haan, Amrinder ji di soch mutabik main apne orkut de dost mitran nu eh rachna scrap vee kiti see but 30-35 wichoon 4-5 de jwaab hi ayee see..

theek keha sir tusi... main v ik orkut code banaya si.. jeehde vich bhagat singh da ik quote paaya si.. te main orkut te share keeta si.. but mainu koi response.. comment wagaira nahi mileya uss image.. othe hee main balihar 22 g da v banayi hoyi image share keeti na koi ohda response aaya...

 

well its kind of sad that k lok sirf bhagat sirf wargeya nu ohna de janamdin yaa shaheedi divas te hee yaad karde ne..

 

ohna di soch ohna da motive kade parhan yaa samjhan di koshish nahi keeti honi.. te je koi share karn di koshish v karda hai tan koi khaas tawajjo nahi mildi....

 

but apna kamm ae koshish karde rehna.. oh kari javange..

tusi v likhde raho...

 

Theek keh rahe ho Amrinder veer G...Orkut te main khud kai vaar try karke dekh chukka haan par jiven tusin kiha response lagpag naa de braber hunda hai...

 

Jasbir veer g jiven Amrinder veer G keh rahe ne k saanu apna farz nibhaunde rehna chahida hai....te jekar assin har vaar ik pathak tak v theek taran pahunch gaye taan v kaafi hovega....

 

 

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