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| Chuttiyaan Satran(Lines) da panghuda |
Es forum da maksad una satran (lines) nu purna h jehdiyan likhan to baad main aaj tak aage na vadha sakya. Karan kyi rhe , badalde halat, navi soch te lakhaan hi ajeehe hor bahane.......(Par shayad kami mere wich h hoyegi).
Aap sab to umeed karda haan ke ena chutte shabada di ladi nu chalda rakhoge, te es nimane di es aadhi soch nu puran ch yogdaan deyoge.
"Badi Door Mohhabat da ghar h ,
Raah Bhul na javan eh dar h "
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15 Oct 2009
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Vijeyta ji ne reply sohna keeta si... positive sense ch keeta si bhaanve tuhade iss sheyar de...
ki gall ohna ne delete kar ditta??
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15 Oct 2009
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ssa ji.....................
mainu edaan lagdaa ki ..jo ehsaas adhurre reh janade ne..............yan jo shabad asinn purre ni kar paaunde ..........ohna ada mooll zindgi dii har pairr te vadhere peyaa karda.............................
"kujh anliikhee harraf...kujh biin bayaan kiite iitkad....zindgi da puraa te doonghaa sachh ho niibrdee ne.."
----------------------------arshdeep..........
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15 Oct 2009
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| Continue...... |
tuhadian lines nu agge tor riha han bai ji...umeed karda tuhadi soch mutabak hi hovega...
Eh doori dar di jaai hai...
main manda tan nahin eh par hai...
Har bande nu hi barkhudar...
hunda koi na koi dar hai...
agge hun koi hor likho ji te apni kalam da jadu vikhao...
Thanks...
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16 Oct 2009
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IT'S "DARR"????????(KHOFF)
YAN
"DARR"(DARWAZAA/ DOOR)
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16 Oct 2009
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| .......!!! |
Jind BehBal teinDi DeeD taaYiiN,
NazaR TikaaYii Tere hee Dar Hai....
Tu PaLaK Utha SajjaN,Mein DooR NhiN TeinThoN,
Kujh DhuNda(fog) Paar KariN...Je PaoNa RehBar Hai...!!!
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18 Oct 2009
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| .......!!! |
Jind Meri Teri ei ....Te Teri Meri ei,
HumbhLa Te MaaR channa, DuniYa da Ki Darr hai,
PathaRaN di DuniYa vich, PathaR na ho JaaviN,
Je ChiNag JagouNi ei ...PaiNa RagRhNa PathaR hai.
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18 Oct 2009
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| .......!!! |
PathaRaN Nu RaghaRenGa, HeeRe Labh JaaNge,
HeereYaaN DiYaaN CHaMkaN Vich, RasTe Labh JaanGe,
MiLaN DhaRaT AkaSh Da DuMeiL Te HOve JiyoN,
SuMeiL V HoveGa, DiL MuhaBaT da GhaR hai...!!!
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18 Oct 2009
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| .......!!! |
TeRa AaPna Dil SaNaM, MuHaBaTTaN Da MandiR Hai,
RaaH Dil Di DIL Nu Hai...TaiNu KeeHda DaRR Hai....!!!
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18 Oct 2009
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