likhi dhi de nasseb tu vidayi mere malkaa

eh ta jamdi hi ho jandi parayi mere malkaa

niki hundi diya kilkariyaa gunjdiya ney ghar vich

khushiya te ronka khlaoyiaa rehan dar vich

na eh rajeya ney rakhiya na raniya ney rakhiya

varo vari tur gayia sariya hi sakhiya

sanjoga vas ditiya eh tor mere malkaa

likhi dhi de nasseb tu vidayi mere malkaa

niki jehi kali to ajj ban jd phul gyi

jobaney di ruut ajj ohdey uttey dul gyi

trinjna ch beth k oh katan lagi puniya

gund layiaa midhiyaa charra lyiaa churriaaa

ehna gudiya dor kisey hath hor mere malkaa

likhi dhi de nasseb tu vidayi mere malkaa

samma jd aa gya hun udh pudh jaan da

mapeyaaa da dil v ajj dik doley khawnda

hun tur jana jigar di boti ney badi dur

uttey wala v ki karey ni ajj oh v majbur

eh keho jehiya reeta tu banayiaa mere malkaa

likhi dhi de nasseb tu vidayi mere malkaa

bhul chuk maaf

bada sohna de dil de dughai cho likhia tusi...........

Bahut hi wadiya Satveer ji

superb

really liked ur poem. well done.

samma jd aa gya hun udh pudh jaan da

mapeyaaa da dil v ajj dik doley khawnda

hun tur jana jigar di boti ney badi dur

uttey wala v ki karey ni ajj oh v majbur

eh keho jehiya reeta tu banayiaa mere malkaa

likhi dhi de nasseb tu vidayi mere malkaa

Bahut wadhiya satvir.. Lafz ni mere kol..

its really great to read something from you afte a long time... too good..!!

keep writing..!!

Bahut Vadhia G..Keep writing & sharing...!!

good one......

keep sharing

aap sabna bhout bhout dhanwaad aap sab ney meriaa likhiya poems pasand kitiyaa.............. ena maan bhakhhya. ehi kehna chahangi ki main eni jogi ni c jina tusi sareya mainu maan bhakshya bhul chuk maaf.............

vaidya likhya satvir ji n emotional too.keep it up n keep writing.