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parminder bajwa
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Tera dita ful v seene da khanjar ho gya

            Tera dita ful v seene da khanjar ho gya,
             Sochea na c kade eon hoega pr ho gya.

         Ful to mein agg banea, agg to hoea mein neer,
            Tardpea luchhea bhut fer sil pathar ho gya.


Dosti ki dushmani ki, zindagi ki maut ki,
Jd nazar bdli teri sb kujh brabr ho gya.

Hoea ki j snnh lagi, dil ch hoea chananna,
Chhanani hoea jo dil raatan da ambar ho gya.

Na koi mathe ch chanan, na koi seene ch sek,
Iss trah da kis trah “SURJIT PAATAR†ho gya.

___________ Surjit Patar_______________

 

05 Dec 2012

j singh
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Nycc sharing.......thnx.....

06 Dec 2012

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BAHUT VADIA C JI

06 Dec 2012

parminder bajwa
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han g o ta hai

06 Dec 2012

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Bahut vadhia...Patar Sahib is GREAT...

06 Dec 2012

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