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vinay

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ALAG THE DIFFRENT

AASMAAN VICH TARE TA BHUT

PAR CHANDERMA ALAG NAZR ANDA

RUKH TE PATTE TE BHUT HUNDE AA

PAR FUL VKHRA NAZR ANDA

SONE CHANDI MOTIYA DI CHAMK TE BHUT

PAR HEERA VKHRA NAZR ANDA

DUNIYA TE DRIYA NEHRA BHUT

BUT SMUNDR VKHRA HI AZR ANDA

IS DUNIYA TE BNDE TE BHUT

PAR VINAY VRGA YAAR VKHRA NAZR ANDA

05 Apr 2014

JAGJIT SINGH

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Vinay Yaar Ji,

Ideas underlying all 3 of your compositions in Top Ten are great.
How about trying your hand at writing in Punjabi script ?
I think, it will be service to our Ma Boli - Punjabi.

Bahut Sohna likgia hai. TFS

05 Apr 2014

vinay

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thnks veery

06 Apr 2014