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ashwin sandhu
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BUTTERFLIES OF MY DREAMS

what was my mistake o god u tell........

every body said 2 me like this

the people who had trust on me

now have a rust on their mind

i wana cry

i wana die

i wana ask u this mysterious question

 

WHY THE BUTTERFLIES OF MY DREAMS FLY AWAY

fly away

WHY THE BUTTERFLIES OF MY DREAMS FLY Y AWAY

just truth i said nothing lie then also allllll this whyyyyyyyyyy

i wana cry

i wana die

i wana ask u this mysterious quesion

WHY THE BUTTERFLIES OF MY DREAMS FLY Y AWAY

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THANKYOU

                     BY ASHWIN SANDHU..........................

10 Jan 2011

Mandeep Kaur
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Hiiii Ashwin...nice poem...just wanted to say onething...never say i wanna die...no matter what....coz dead person cannot dream....

10 Jan 2011

ashwin sandhu
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no but sometimes situation becomes so worst that there is other option except 2 die

11 Jan 2011

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Hi Ashvin..We are not aware of your personal situation, but I am agree with Mandeep that you or no-one else should never talk about die....As this can not improve the circumstances....Only way to make it better is by making your voice heard or finding other ways but always think positive....

 

เจ—เจฟเจฐเจคเฉ‡ เจนเฉˆเจ‚ เจถเจพเจน-เจธเจตเจพเจฐ เจฎเฉˆเจฆเจพเจจ-เจ-เจœเฉฐเจ— เจฎเฉ‡เจ‚ เจœเฉ‹ เจ˜เฉเจŸเจจเฉ‹เจ‚ เจ•เฉ‡ เจฌเจฒ เจšเจฒเจคเฉ‡ เจนเฉˆเจ‚ เจตเฉ‹เจน เจ•เจฟเจ† เจ–เจพเจ• เจ—เจฟเจฐเฉ‡เจ‚เจ—เฉ‡

 

Wish u all the best

11 Jan 2011

harjinder kaur
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ashwin.....butterflies r coming back........juz be +ve..........

 

blessings.......

11 Jan 2011

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nice one bro..


11 Jan 2011

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