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Chaundi bhut c
assin hi russ behnde c niki jahi gal ute
oh tan sanu har Vaar mnaundi bhut c,
assin na parwah kiti kade ohde kise hanju di
oh tan sade lai jind tadfaundi bhut c,
sada nika jiha dukh ohdi jaan kad lainda c
par sade kolon dukh apne oh chapaundi bhut c,
mere to hi na sambal hoye suche moti pyar de
oh tan yaaro mainu dilo chaundi bhut c...
17 Aug 2014

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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Bahut sohna likhia hai ji. Carry on...
17 Aug 2014

Navjot Kaur
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So Beautiful lines !!

17 Aug 2014

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SSA veer G

 

welcome to the world of punjabizm...

 

Bohat wadhiya likhea,..............good

 

17 Aug 2014

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Waheguru !!!! 

 

what a simple and loving confession 

 

bht hi soniya lines aa sir....

 

TFS 

 

 

18 Aug 2014

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dhanwad g sareya da

18 Aug 2014

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