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| oh din ni mud ke labhne jo kde clg vich gujare c...... |
na oh din hi mud k aune...jo kde clg vich gujare c...na hi yar hi mud ke labhne jo kde sade sahare c....clg vich nit hi ladde c...naal yaar beli v khadde c..class v bunk krde c ..kde kise lecture vich na vadhde c....sada lye najare c.....oh din mud ke ni aune jo kde clg vich gujare c......
ghron tyr ho ka auna ....pr lect koi na launa..madam nu v nit satauna.....chah vich mitha vadh pawauna...pr eh jindgi de rang ne sare v....oh din ni mud k aune jo kde clg vich gujare c......canteen te mehfil lgdi....suit wali bdi pyari lgdi......jdo sade kol d langhdi...ohde roop de painde lishkare c....oh din ni mud ke labhne jo clg vich gujare c.......ohne v naal lg k behna....pr kde kuj v na kehna.....mitra ne v sylabus mng laina...sirf gl krn de mare g........oh din ni mud k labhne jo kde clg vich gujare c.....mba rab asre hogi....oh jindgi pta ni kithe kho gyi.....kyin d engagement v ho gyi..MAAN vangu hun sare lain najare g..oh din ni mud ke labhne jo kde clg vich gujare c......
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23 Dec 2010
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22 g well written but post in length
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23 Dec 2010
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wah ji tusi ta aundian ne e ronka la ditian............well done......
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23 Dec 2010
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