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IK DHEE DE GUNAAH (CONFESSION)

Kadi lage eh waqt di hera feri

kadi lage sab apna hi kamaaya

teriya ramzaa tu hi jaane rabba

khore ki ki mere lekhe laaya.....

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......

Zindagi khushi nal chali jandi c....

fer dukha da baddal aaya

ik insaan eho jeha milya

jehne duniya da saath chudaya

umra de mere nal kar ke waade

menu apniya to kar gya paraaya

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......

Begaane ghar ch sabb begaane hi rahe

na kise ne v gal nal laya....

fer umeed dikhi menu ik choti ji

jad ik pari da suneha aaya....

os umeed di ta kukh ch hi maut hogi

jad rall sab ne sooli chadaaya

taras os din rabb nu khore...

kyu ni kukh ch mari dhee te aaya

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......

Ik aas ne fer dobara mera darr khadkaya

fer ik din ik chotta farishta ujadi maa de ghar aaya.....

oh v aas bahuti der na rahi....

thoda chir hi c laad ladaaya

aisi neri fer ik chali waqt di

menu begaaneya ne v karta paraya

jehde lad lag k sab chad dita c

ohne hi dukha de lad laaya

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......

Fir chete aaye menu baapu te amadi

nale yaad aaya meri amadi da jaya

par ohna lyi ta main marr gyi c

dobara moh na ohna nu mera aaya.....

aulaad wajo menu gal nal la k

ohna apna farz te nibhayaa

par rishteya di ladi ta odo hi tutt gyi c

jad ghar to c bahar pair paya....

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ...

Maa baap da dil pta ni kina roya hona

jehda dard mainu ajj maa ban k aaya

es gal di sazaa wajo hi ki pata

mera to door ho gya mera jaya

door hoye mere veere bhaabiya

nale door metho sara jagg hoya....

ikk ikk rishta tutt gya mere hatho....

jehdi peed nu main dil nal laaya....

meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ...

Mere lekha di kaali syaahi ne rabba....

meri zindagi ch nera paya......

menu othe lya k chad gye ....

jithe saath na deve saaya....

kade maapeya de ,kade bhraawa de ,

kadi putta de pyaar lyi tarsaaya.....

'NAVI' di kamaayi te 'RABB" di likhaayi ne

ajj fer ik dhee, ik bhen , ik maa , ik kudi nu rooh andro rawaaya ...

by- navi

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<p><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"><span style="color: #222222; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;">Kadi lage eh waqt di hera feri</span> </span></strong></p>
<div style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"><strong>kadi lage sab apna hi kamaaya  </strong> </span>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">teriya ramzaa tu hi jaane rabba </span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">khore ki ki mere lekhe laaya.....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Zindagi khushi nal chali jandi c....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">fer dukha da baddal aaya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ik insaan eho jeha milya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jehne duniya da saath chudaya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">umra de mere nal kar ke waade</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">menu apniya to kar gya paraaya</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Begaane ghar ch sabb begaane hi rahe</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">na kise ne v gal nal laya....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">fer umeed dikhi menu ik choti ji</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jad ik pari da suneha aaya....</span></strong></div>
<div><span style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">os umeed di ta kukh ch hi maut hogi</span></strong></span></div>
<div><span style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jad rall sab ne sooli chadaaya</span></strong></span></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">taras os din rabb nu khore...</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">kyu ni kukh ch mari dhee te aaya</span></strong></div>
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<div style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Ik aas ne fer dobara mera darr khadkaya </span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">fer ik din ik chotta farishta ujadi maa de ghar aaya.....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">oh v aas bahuti der na rahi....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">thoda chir hi c laad ladaaya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">aisi neri fer ik chali waqt di</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">menu begaaneya ne v karta paraya </span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jehde lad lag k sab chad dita c</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ohne hi dukha de lad laaya</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ......</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Fir chete aaye menu baapu te amadi</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">nale yaad aaya meri amadi da jaya</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">par ohna lyi ta main marr gyi c</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">dobara moh na ohna nu mera aaya.....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">aulaad wajo menu gal nal la k</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ohna apna farz te nibhayaa</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">par rishteya di ladi ta odo hi tutt gyi c</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jad ghar to c bahar pair paya....</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ...</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Maa baap da dil pta ni kina roya hona</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jehda dard mainu ajj maa ban k aaya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">es gal di sazaa wajo hi ki pata</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">mera to door ho gya mera jaya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">door hoye mere veere bhaabiya</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">nale door metho sara jagg hoya....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ikk ikk rishta tutt gya mere hatho....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jehdi peed nu main dil nal laaya....</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri kamaayi te teri likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee nu rawaaya ...</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Mere lekha di kaali syaahi ne rabba....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">meri zindagi ch nera paya......</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">menu othe lya k chad gye ....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">jithe saath na deve saaya....</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">kade maapeya de ,kade bhraawa de ,</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">kadi putta de pyaar lyi  tarsaaya.....</span></strong></div>
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<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">'NAVI' di kamaayi te 'RABB" di likhaayi ne</span></strong></div>
<div><strong><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">ajj fer ik dhee, ik bhen , ik maa , ik kudi nu rooh andro rawaaya ...</span></strong></div>
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Candid confession straight from the cockles of heart, without mincing matters.

Write up has honesty, simplicity and clariity. It has restrospection, revisit of past and deep sense of remorse over mundane acts and destiny's retributive reaction. Boldly written.

GodBless !

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again a precious comment from ur side as expected.....

thank u so much for appriciation......

thanx alt for motivation everytime.....

learning alt from you sir.....

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bht jada dil to dhanwaadi aa tuhadi gurpreet g......

apna keemati samaa kad k vichaar vataandra karde reha karo.....

ta ji is nimaani nu v kujh apna aap sudhaarn da moka mil ske.....

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Kinni be bak te imaandar kalam nal smaaj de bnaye purhan roopi rishteyan ch pisdi hoyi zindghi di marrmik katha keh ditti Nvi ..

Tusin darsaya hai k je kudi apne faisle mutabik jeon di gall kardi hai tan khoon de rishte bali charh jande ne te no looking back ..ethon e kudi di trrasdi shuru ho jandi hai te usda abla samjh ke shoshan hon lagda hai , jado maa peo di support hundi hai odon kudi apne sohre vi sukh paundi hai .. Ya usda shoshan karn di himmat nahi hundi in laws ch.

Kudian de nal sambhandit saare pehlooan te roshni paa rahi hai eh dastan ...

Rab charhdi kala ch rakhe tuhanu nvi

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Navi ji eh tuhadi eh rachna parr k menu kuj sattraan yaad aa gayian....

"daro deewar se jala nahi jata amma

ab mujse ghar bar sambala nahi jata amma

ye ansu nahi the jo laut na sake vapis

kisi ko yoon ghar se nikala nahi jata amma"

eh ik dhee apni maa nu kehndi hai shikayat kardi hai k mein ajeha ki kar ditta k mere layi vapsi de sare darwaze bandd ho gye.

so tuhadi rachna v kalje nu lahoo luhaan karan vali hai.atti sundar.dard swaal atte ik aurat di lachari nu darsaundi.very nice

15 Mar 2015

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Ik dhee de gunaah sirf ikk likhat nahi hai apne aape naal laddi gayi ladaai hai Navi jee.
Pehlan main ess likhat nu jo views dite si ajj dowara read karke halke jaape .Te lagga ki duniya ch asin kine b Galat kyon na hoyia jekar sade parents sade vall ne sadi maa sada pakh galat hunde b lai rahi hai tan sanu dukh nahi lagda.
But siyane kehnde ne "ki dukh ch veganiya naalo apneya di chup bahut dukh dindi hai"

Bahut zazbaati kita te ruvayia b tuhadi eas likhat

Ne or duniya da asli sach rishtiyan da ghaan hunda b nazar aunda hai. mainu nahi pata ki ehda tuhadi life naal kina va-basta hai par dil hilor ke rakh dita .
Bahut dardan ch bhini rachna hai.
Waheguru mehar kare NAVI jee

15 Mar 2015

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gurpreet ji tusi ene dil nal vichar vatandra kita te apna precious time dobara dita es rachna nu ohde lyi bahut shukar guzaar aa tuhadi

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jaddo kise nu hadd to vadd pyar karo te oh sanu dhokaa de jave dard ta jaroor hunda.........rab nu rosa vee......................ik vedna aa tuhadi ikk dard ee......no words

18 Mar 2015