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ਘੁੱਪ ਹਨੇਰੇ

ਭੁੱਲ ਕੇ ਨਾ ਲੰਘੀ ਸਜਣਾ, ਨਗਰੀ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਵਾਲੀ,
ਇਸ ਨਗਰੀ ਘੁੱਪ ਹਨੇਰੇ, ਕੁਝ ਨਹੀ ਪੈਣਾ ਪੱਲੇ ਤੇਰੇ,
ਇਸ  ਨਗਰੀ ਸੱਜਣ ਘੱਟ, ਠੱਗ ਚੋਰ ਵਧੇਰੇ,
ਗੋਰੇ ਜਿਸਮ, ਮਿਠੀ ਬੋਲੀ ਯਾਰ ਨਕਾਬੀ ਚੇਹਰੇ,
ਲੁੱਟ ਲੈਂਦੇ ਸੱਬ ਕੁਝ,ਆਕੇ ਸਾਹਾਂ ਤੋਂ ਵਧ ਨੇੜੇ,
ਰੁਲਦਾ ਰਾਂਝਾ ਨਿਮਾਣਾ ਯਾਰੋ,ਹੀਰ ਵੱਸੇ ਜਦ ਖੇੜੇ,
ਮਾਰੂਥਲ ਸੜਦੀ ਸੱਸੀ, ਯਾਰ ਨਾ ਦਿਸਦਾ ਨੇੜੇ ਤੇੜੇ.......????

24 May 2012

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wah veer g... beautiful lines... tfs

24 May 2012

j singh
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thnx.....ਸੁਨੀਲ ਵੀਰੇ.....

24 May 2012

Harpinder Mander
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ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਵੀਰ,,,ਜੀਓ,,,

24 May 2012

   Jagdev Raikoti
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ਖੂਬ ਲਿਖਇਆ ਹੈ ...
24 May 2012

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Nice One Janab...thnx 4 sharing..!!

24 May 2012

Jass Panaichan
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nice one ji .....

25 May 2012

j singh
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THNX.......TO.......ALL......i post it only.....

26 May 2012

Pradeep Gupta
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bahut wadiya likheya jasbir bai ji.Good one

28 May 2012

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thnx.....pardeep.....

29 May 2012

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