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jaspal pier
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Dhokha de dita takdeer ne
Aene hi ma mere sah baki si
Adhoore reh gaye Jo cha baki si
Dhokha de dita takdeer ne
Sath shadd dita shreer ni
Zindgi da v kush aesa khel si
Likheya aethon tak da hi Mel si
Chup kar ma bas kar hun hor poune keerne
Dhokha de dita takdeer ne
Sath shadd dita shreer ni
Mere hath tan hale aloone si
Kai ambar hale hor shoone si
Par madam puttan dite na rok laey mathe di lakeer ne
Dhokha de dita takdeer ne
Sath shadd dita shreer ni
Hale bharavan de viha da koi shagan manaeya na
Bharavan ne v meri doli nu dhaka laeya na
Manu jandi nu na rokeya rokeya na kise veer ne
Aena hi si sath ma shadd de hun sog ni
Dhian de dukhan to wadda hunda na koi rog ni
Maout nu jiteya na ajj tak na ameer ne na fakeer ne
Dhokha de dita takdeer ne
Sath shadd dita shreer ni
..... ............... ... .. . ..pier
31 Oct 2014

sukhpal singh
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wah ji wah...

 

bahut hi sohna likheya veer....beautiful writing !!

 

good

03 Nov 2014

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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Bahut sohna likhia g
03 Nov 2014

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