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Navi

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IK SUPNA

Kal socha na larde larde jad akh lag gyi ta ik supne ne mera mann dukha

dita baht jada....

tuhade sab nal v sanjha karn lagi aa, apne vichaar jarur dyo.....

"apne aap ne labhan di koshish ch bhatakdi payi c......ta ik kudi mili bahut buri haalat ch , jehde adh fatte kapde , ohde leera ho chuke mann nu dasde c te ohdiya akhan de hanju ohdiya dil te lagiya satta nu.....

jad main ohdeya behaal haala da sawaal puchya ta oh bhoobha maar maar k mere gal lag k royi te apne haal eda kahe ohne....

" jad jammi c ta ghar de kudi hon di sazaa wajo hmesha vitkara karde rahe....

jad vyaahi gyi ta begaani dhee keh k sohre ghar de hmesha vitkara karde rahe....

jad mere jahi ik kudi ne hi meri kukh ch pair dharya ta ohde nal v vitkara ho gya.....

te ajj je main apna mann pathar kar lya hai ta , lok eh keh keh k dukh deno nai hatde

ki "EHNU DUKH NI HUNDA KYUNKI EHDA ZAMEER MARR CHUKKA AA"

ajj main os rabb nu labhan turi aa ta ki ohnu bitha k puch ska....

"Ki jis umare ik kudi da ghar v nai wasda os umar ch hi ghar ujad jawe ta

zameer kida na mare"

" jad dhee da kukh vich hi jabardasti sare katal kra den ta

zameer kida na mare"

" Jad daaj de laalchi sohre tuhanu paise li kise hor nal v toran li tyaar ho jan ta

zameer kida na mare"

" Jad apne hi tuhadi izzat te gandi nazar rakhn ta zameer kida na mare"

"MARR CHUKKA HAI MERA V ZAMEER" ,

Par duniya lyi.....mere apne ander hale oh zameer jiyunda hai......

Je es samaaj vich ik kalli kudi de vichran vaste ohnu apne aap nu jiyunde

hi ik

laash wang loka de agge apne aap nu noch noch k khaan li rakhna paye ...

ta tu hi dass rabba ki zameer kida na mare......"

Main apna aap labhan turi vi os kudi nal tur pyi os rabb nu labhan ta ke ohnu ik

wari sirf ena keh ska bitha k...:

"RABBA ES KUDI DI ZINDAGI TU JEE K DEKH IK DIN

JE NA TERA V ZAMEER MARR GYA TA AAKHI....."

bas es to baad jad akh khuli ta bahar bahut baarish ho rahi c.....

warde meeh ch kothe te ja ke os rabb wal takdi da mera cheeka maar maar ke ron nikal gya....

fer injh laga ki

"MAIN APNE HANJUYAN CH BHIJ GYI TE RABB APNE....

fer injh laga ki

"MERE HANJUYAN NAL APNE HANJU IK MIK KARKE MENU RABB AAKH

REHA KI TU FIKAR KYU KARDI HAI DHEEYE TERI ARDAAS NU BAHUT JALDI

POORA KAR KE IK "KUDIYA DA SHEHAR " JARUR BANAYU...."

eh kudi jo menu mili supne ch......oh es samaaj ch vasadi har kudi da roop c jo

ehna taseehya to nikal k v apni zindagi de safar ch agge wadh rahi aa....

parmatma mehar kare ehna kudiya te....

BY-NAVI

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<p><strong style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;">Kal socha na larde larde jad akh lag gyi ta ik supne ne mera mann dukha </strong></p>
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<div style="color: #222222; font-family: arial; font-size: small; line-height: normal; text-align: start;"><strong>dita </strong><strong>baht jada....</strong>
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<div><strong>tuhade sab nal v sanjha karn lagi aa, apne vichaar jarur dyo.....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>"apne aap ne labhan di koshish ch bhatakdi payi c......ta ik kudi mili bahut buri haalat ch , jehde adh fatte kapde , ohde leera ho chuke mann nu dasde c te ohdiya akhan de hanju ohdiya dil te lagiya satta nu.....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>jad main ohdeya behaal haala da sawaal puchya ta oh bhoobha maar maar k mere gal lag k royi te apne haal eda kahe ohne....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>" jad jammi c ta ghar de kudi hon di sazaa wajo hmesha vitkara karde rahe....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>  jad vyaahi gyi ta begaani dhee keh k sohre ghar de hmesha vitkara karde rahe....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>  jad mere jahi ik kudi ne hi meri kukh ch pair dharya ta ohde nal v vitkara ho      gya.....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>te ajj je main apna mann pathar kar lya hai ta , lok eh keh keh k dukh deno nai hatde</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>ki "EHNU DUKH NI HUNDA KYUNKI EHDA ZAMEER MARR CHUKKA AA"</strong></div>
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<div><strong>ajj main os rabb nu labhan turi aa ta ki ohnu bitha k puch ska....</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
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<div><strong>"Ki jis umare ik kudi da ghar v nai wasda os umar ch hi ghar ujad jawe ta </strong></div>
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<div><strong> zameer kida na mare"</strong></div>
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<div><strong>" jad dhee da kukh vich hi jabardasti sare katal kra den ta </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>  zameer kida na mare" <br /></strong></div>
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<div><strong>" Jad daaj de laalchi sohre tuhanu paise li kise hor nal v toran li tyaar ho jan ta</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>  zameer kida na mare"</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>" Jad apne hi tuhadi izzat te gandi nazar rakhn ta zameer kida na mare"</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>  "MARR CHUKKA HAI MERA V ZAMEER" , </strong></div>
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<div><strong> Par duniya lyi.....mere apne ander hale oh zameer jiyunda hai......</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong> Je es samaaj vich ik kalli kudi de vichran vaste ohnu apne aap nu jiyunde </strong></div>
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<div><strong>hi ik </strong></div>
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<div><strong>laash wang loka de agge apne aap nu noch noch k khaan li rakhna paye ...</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>ta tu hi dass rabba ki zameer kida na mare......"</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>Main apna aap labhan turi vi os kudi nal tur pyi os rabb nu labhan ta ke ohnu ik </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>wari sirf ena keh ska bitha k...:</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>"RABBA ES KUDI DI ZINDAGI TU JEE K DEKH IK DIN </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong> JE NA TERA V ZAMEER MARR GYA TA AAKHI....." </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>bas es to baad jad akh khuli ta bahar bahut baarish ho rahi c.....</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>warde meeh ch kothe te ja ke os rabb wal takdi da mera cheeka maar maar ke ron </strong><strong>nikal gya....</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>fer injh laga ki </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>"MAIN APNE HANJUYAN CH BHIJ GYI TE RABB APNE....</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>fer injh laga ki </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>"MERE HANJUYAN NAL APNE HANJU IK MIK KARKE MENU RABB AAKH </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>REHA KI TU FIKAR KYU KARDI HAI DHEEYE TERI ARDAAS NU BAHUT JALDI </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>POORA KAR KE IK "KUDIYA DA SHEHAR " JARUR BANAYU...."</strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>eh kudi jo menu mili supne ch......oh es samaaj ch vasadi har kudi da roop c jo </strong></div>
<div><strong><br /></strong></div>
<div><strong>ehna taseehya to nikal k v apni zindagi de safar ch agge wadh rahi aa....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>parmatma mehar kare ehna kudiya te....</strong></div>
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<div><strong>BY-NAVI  </strong></div>
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Gurpreet

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Eh tuhade ladaz poore samaaj layi qustion be jo samaaj de rakhe ban ban vaithe aa
Ajj ohi samaaj nu piche dhak rahe aa j aurat agge vadh di hai tan eh buri bajadi hai
J kujh na kare tan eh bhar ban jandi aa
J haqan layi lade tan tej bandi aa j na lade tan ehnu tan kujh pata e nahi
Har paase aurat nu hee kossia janada hai ess mard mohri samaaj ch
Kehan nu tan sare haq baravr jadon bari den dee ja haq lain dee aave
Fer aurat hundi kon aa
Wah oye samaaj deo rakgeo
I salute u navi jee
Bahut sohne sach viyaan kite aa bs laage rahe samaaj dee. Atma jagaun ch

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bahut bahut shukriya tuhada gurpreet g......waqt kadeya te mere supne nu padeya.....

te ene sohne vichaar v saanjhe kite.....

mera sochna aa ki mere kahe je kise ik insaan di v soch badal jaye ta meri es ladaayi da mull pe jayuga.....

te meri zindagi da v ta jo os parmatma nu jawaab den jogi howa.....

10 Aug 2014

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Nce wording nce thinking

10 Aug 2014

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ਅਜੋਕੇ ਸਮਾਜ ਵਿਚ ਆਈ ਗਿਰਾਵਟ ਦੀ ਮੁੰਹ ਬੋਲਦੀ ਤਸਵੀਰ ਹੈ ਆਪ ਜੀ ਦੀ ਇਹ ਲਿਖਤ | Very well written again |ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਵੱਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ,,,

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Navi

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bahut shukriya harpinder g....

tuhade sab di duyawa sadkaa hi aa....

bht dhanwaad sab da menu punjabizm ch ena pyaar den li....

koshish jaari rahugi....

10 Aug 2014

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Sensitive, agonising and revolting piece of work - reflects exploitation, suffering, pain and yearning of a female soul to wriggle out of the clutches of the exploiter's talons.

It may be a dream, but it reveals truth...

Very well written, Navi Ji !

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bahut jada dhanwaadi aa jagjit g....

main tuhade contribution di hi wait krdi c es post to coz tuhade vichara to bina eh adhoori reh jandi aa...

well menu sharam aandi aa ajkal de samaaj te jo kudi da zameer ohde shareer nal jorde aa,,.....

par es supne ch jo kudi aa ohnu maan aa apne aap te ki ohdi izzatt ohdiya apniya socha nal aa...

duniya li zameer marr gya hoyu par os parmatma li te ohde apne aap li jiyunda raho hmesha....

nai kardi parwaah kise keemat te v eho ji niwi soch rakhn wale samaj di...

te kare v kyu ik kudi....

i am so sorry for being so arrogant....

but i need a full support of all punjabizm members for spreading this in society,,....

atleast a single person will get changed

10 Aug 2014

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navvi g dian de dard ine perha nall likhia hai ke je kite raab parh lae tan jarror hi bubba mar ke rovega bus main tan iho khanaga

NA KHAB KADE IH MURH KE JAME
NA NAGG PERHA DA DHIAN NU DANGE.......RAAB RAKHA NAVI G

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