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amrit aulakh
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gazal

aj har dar te fitkara ne;;das kehre dar te java mai.

tak halat ese eh duniya di;;bus socha te ghabrava mai.

 

 

eh sari duniya mnu te yaro;;maya diwani lgdi hai.

kida pyr apne di mehak nu ghr ghr pohchava mai.

 

 

chape chaoe utte dhrti de sab khoon dikhae dinda hai

hanjuan vich gujre waqt mera ki hasa te ki muskrava mai.

 

 

ghr kar lea ae nafrat veran ne,,lokaide he dila andar.

kinj es nfrat nu dur kra ,,kinj pyr de deep jgava mai

 

 

24 Apr 2012

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gud one amrit g...


kinj nafrat nu dur kran ... kinj pyar de deep jagavn main...

 

nice lines... bs thodi jihi presentation vall dhian kro g..

 

tfs

24 Apr 2012

j singh
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very nycc......ji.....

25 Apr 2012

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