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simar d sekhon sekhon
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KYU

koi kehnda pyar rab da doosra nam hai..

par pyar rabb da nahi shetain da doosra nam hai..

pyar vehm hai...pagal pan hai....

pyar di koi hand nahi...

pyar ek jal hai jehda bhole bhale panchiyan nu apne jal ch fasuda hai.....

pyar diami ja sthai nahi..

pyar ek chin bhangar da jajba hai.......jis da koi roop nahi.....

PAR fir vi kudrat da nizm hai ...

ki jad vi pyar bhukiyan do rooha mildiya.....

pyar di aag machdi hai......KYU KYU,,

23 Feb 2011

Nimarbir Singh
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sohna likheya g.....sabh de apne-apne vichar hunde aa te mere vichar v kuch hor han par tuhade vichar padh k v achha laggeya......khush raho !!!!!
24 Feb 2011

simar d sekhon sekhon
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thanks nimar g......

06 Mar 2011

Divroop sandhu
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Na ta eh khulli kavita hai..Na ee eh ryhm hai ! Te dooji gall tuhadi script sahi nahi hai ! You need to focus on what u wana write ! Sirf 'piyar' warga lafz laike leekan wahun da koi fayda nahi...Kavita de basic parho te kuj mojooda kavi parho u 'll be arrite ! thx..

09 Mar 2011

simar d sekhon sekhon
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at divroop tuc dasdeo kive likhde..becoz i dont knw hw to write.....dese are only some words which i want to share...else nothing.....

16 Mar 2011

Divroop sandhu
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Eh sikhaya nahi ja sakda Sekhon Dear ! Told you ki best thing is to Read ! Navi kavita parhan ton shuru karo...Sidha shiv nahi ! And i m sure u'll be fine....

18 Mar 2011

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