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jaspal pier
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ehsaas
Ma hun main ghar ton bahar reh ke tang aa geya
Kine pind khushiya de langh aa geya
Meri soch nu aa gai moch Jo challan ni dindi
Meri bebassi di har manu hallan ni dindi
Hun jag jag ke rat de pal nahi kattde
Hun Chapal moodhi maran te supne darouno ni hatde
Satt lagan te dukh da ehsas nahi hunda
Main jounda firda han ea vi vishvas nahi hunda
Khul ke hasse nu hun tmudatt ho gai hai
Laggda ae jindgi bemurabat ho gai Hai
Har cheej hun bejan jehi lagdi ae
Jindgi tan hun mehman jehi lagdi ae
Bharose beete wele diyan gallan ho gaey ne
Moj masti hasse thathe bade chir de kho gaey ne
Holi holi jounde reahan di aas vi. Buj rahi hai
Jindgi mashin banke reh gai hai es ton wad kuj nahi hai
Main awargi ton wapis aouna chonda han
Main mud ton fir jinda hona chonda han
15 Nov 2014

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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Like it
15 Nov 2014

sukhpal singh
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a poetry full of emotions,...............depth in feelings behind the poetry,...............jeo veer duawaan aap g lai...

06 Dec 2014

jaspal pier
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Badi mehrbani ji maan rakhan lai
06 Dec 2014

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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Jaspal Ji it is Good one !

 

Emotions deftly woven into the write-up on story of life ...longing for life after a wanderer's experiments...

07 Dec 2014

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