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jujhar singh
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gall

ਆ ਗੱਲ ਕਰੀਏ ਓਹਨਾ ਥਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ,
ਮੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਹੋਯੀਆਂ 'ਬ੍ਫਾਵਾਂ'  ਦੀ|


ਮੇਰੇ ਹੌਕਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਮੇਰੇ ਹਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ,
ਦਿਲ ਚੋਂ ਨਿਕਲਦੀਆਂ ਆਹਾਂ ਦੀ|

 

ਤੇਰੇ ਆਉਣ ਦੀ ਤੇਰੇ ਜਾਨ ਦੀ,
ਮੇਰਾ ਖੜ ਕੇ ਤਕਦੇ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਦੀ|


ਓਹਨਾ 'ਆਪਣੇ' ਬੇਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੀ,
ਓਹਨਾ 'ਗੈਰ' ਬਾ-ਵਫਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ|


ਚਾਨਣੀਆ-ਚਾਨਣੀਆ ਰਾਤਾਂ ਦੀ,
ਤੂਤਾਂ ਦੀਯਾਂ ਠੰਡੀਆਂ ਛਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ|


ਤੇਰੀ ਆਹਟ ਦੀ ਤੇਰੀ ਕਲਪਨਾ ਦੀ,
ਜੋ ਲੰਘ ਨਾ ਹੋਏ ਓਹਨਾ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਦੀ|


ਬਦਲਦੇ ਤੇਰੇ ਇਰਾਦਿਆਂ ਦੀ,
'ਤੇ ਬਦਲ ਰਹੀਆਂ ਹਵਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ|


ਤੇਰੇ ਤੇ ਜੋ ਕਦੇ ਮਰਦੇ ਸੀ,
ਓਹਨਾ ਗੁਜਰ ਚੁੱਕੇ 'ਬਰਾਹਾਂ' ਦੀ|  

 

jujhar

 

 

 "GALL"

 

a gall kariye ohna thavan di|  

mere naal hoyian vafavan di|

 

mere haukian di mere havan di,

dil chon nikldian aahan di|

 

tere aun di tere jan di,

mera khad ke takde rahan di|

 

ohna 'apne' bedardan di,

ohna 'gair' ba-vafavan di|

 

channian-channian ratan di,

tutan diyan thandian shavan di|

 

teri aahat di teri kalpana di,

maithon langh na hoye ohna rahan di|

 

badlde tere iradian di

'te badal rahian havavan di|

 

tere te jo marde si,

ohna gujr chukke 'brahan' di|

 

jujhar   

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

30 Jun 2011

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Mainu bahut vadia laggi veer g... nice one ... tfs

 

chotti chotti likhat ne par kafi kujj khi rhian ne

30 Jun 2011

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bahut sohni rachna jujhar bai ji.....sanjha karan layee shukriya ji............

30 Jun 2011

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mavi veer ji, apda shukria ji....tuhadi tareef lai...par ik gall da gilla hai tuhade nal...jekar tarif sab de sahmne kar sakde ho...tan ik sache dost hon de na-te kamian sab de samne kiu nahi dasde.....

 

mainu ik gall badi der ton mehsus ho rahi hai (jado da 'preet ji' wala kand hoya hai....koi vi sujhvan veer kise di galtian nu dasda nahi...mainu pata hai merian 1-2 posts vich bahut sarian kamian si fir vi sab ne tarif kiti.....maf karna veer ji eho jihi khushi ik pal laye khushi dindi hai...par sachi alochna hor majboot kardi hai.....sahit vich vi te jindagi vich vi.......

 

balihar ji, amrinder ji,divroop ji te tusi 'mavi ji'..kise di alochna nahi kar raha....mainu lag riha hai sab soch rahe hon ke chalo apan ki laina......

par veer ji mafi chahanga tusi ma-boli da nuksan kar rahe ho...baki tusi ap samjhdar ho...

 

main tan ehi kahanga ke sab di us de hak anusar tarif vi karo te alochna vi...te han sab de sahmne karo...ta ke baki nave dost...jo sahit vich aje nave ne jarur faida hovega....

 

tarif lai te ghise-pitte shabdan 'ch ruh fukan da shukria ji

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veer g... edan di koi gall nahi a ..... tuci mere rply post chk kro ... mainu jo galat lgda a main dasda han... agge samne wala kayee vari gussa vi ho janda a  te kayee vari apni os galti nu dur vi krda hai...


tuhadi is rachna vich mainu sirf 2-3 shabda vich typing mistake laggi ... par oh tuci jiven jiven type kro ge aap dur ho jan gia....



30 Jun 2011

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thank you for reading & editing also...bro....

07 Jul 2011

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