jithe bina socha to hi asi chale jandiya ,
aisa saade li vi rabba koi thaa hunda....
bachpan wargiya oh mauja hundiya....
oh bhena te saheliya da kath hunda
na kukh vich hi saade te kehar hunda......
kaash kudiya da v rabba ik shehar hunda......

 

jithe maawa hundiya ,jithe dhiya hundiya 
oh trinjhan hunde , oho teeyan hundiya..
befikariya hi jawaani ch pair rakhdiya
na balaatkaar wala eh zehar hunda.....
kaash kudiya da v rabba ik shehar hunda

 

na fikar hunda kadi maawa nu 
Na dhheeya kolo hi sab jar hunda...
Na begaane ghar de oh lok(sohra ghar)hunde
na hi kudiya de mann ch eh darr hunda
na DAAJ de laalchiya da dheeyan na vair hunda
kaash kudiya da v rabba ik shehar hunda  

 

maawa di mamta hundi , dhiyaan da pyaar hunda
bhena di ardaas hundi , kudiya da satkaar hunda
na sharmindagi hundi , na koi vair hunda
'Navi' wargiya da vi satkaar har pair hunda.....
sab apne hi hunde , na koi gair hunda
kaash kudiya da v rabba ik shehar hunda
By - Navi 

Longing for true women's lib. Verse full of wishful thinking for a carefree, blot free, fearless ambience and celebration of childhood, youth and entire life, while basking in the warm glow of innocent and guileless affection of one and all.

TFS, madam Navi ji.

thank you so much jagjit ji.....everytime you honoured me with so many precious comments.....undoubtedly i wish for this carefree and fearless atmosphere for every girl......

but as i am also a part of society so can't be biased.....very soon will post about the deteriorating character of girls now a days......

one again thank u so much....

Kya baat hai g...Emotions brilliantly brought in a verse...bahut khoob. .keep it up.

bahut bhaut shukriya sandeep g

 

es dunia vich te kudian da ghar hi nahi ban skia te shehr te badi doooor di gal hai; han ji per tssawer te kar hi sakde han>>>> bahut hi Ahla likhia hai. Parmatma tuhanu khushian da bhandar bakhshey. Likhde raho te khush raho.

bahut dhanwaadi aa harpal tuhadi.....

thank u so much.....

kade te parmatma sunuga hi sadi......

main sab kudiya lyi hi ardaas kiti rabb kol....

tuhadi gal v theek aa ki kudiya da ta koi ghar ni bnya....

ehde te v hune post paan lagi aa 

plz refer to my post "KYU"

tuhade te v waheguru g hmesha mehar karn.....

rabb rakha.....

Bahut sohne zazbaat ukere ne apni kalam te
Jehan cho
Jeundi reh kudiye wa kamaal e kita pita wakhra topic aa

bahut bahut shukriya gurpreet g..... thank you so much.....

 

jiyundiya wasdiya rehn mere nal es shehar diya kudiya v.... 

 

rabb bhali kare