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RABB NAL GILAA
Ajj os rabb nal.fer gilaa kar lya main....par ajj eh ni kehna tenu rabba ki enj kyu kita tu mere nal.....
Kise nal v hirkh nai menu.....ik tere to siwa.....
Tu v apna ranjha raazi kar k dekh le rabba.....
Kini takleef de lyenga....???
Hun te dard v ni hunda, mann pathar jeha hoyi janda.....
Par teri v zidd aa mere nal, tu sochda ae ki jiyundi kiwe turi firdi ae....?
Jaan v nichod le rabba, baaki te tu kakh jina v ni palle chadya......
Je teri zidd ae te meri v zidd hi ae tere nal.....jini takleef deni de le tu.....
hun sachi nai dukh hunda.....
Dukh te menu odo ni.hoya jad har rishta chad k begaane ghar gyi c......
Dukh te odo ni hoya jad vasde ghar nu waqt di haneri ne ujaad k rakh dita....
Rabba dukh te menu odo ni.hoya jad mere apne dil da tota mere to kho lya sab ne rall k.....
Fer hun ki dukh hona.....os din mann pathar kar lya c.....
Par tere dil ch reham nai aaya....tu ik wari fer koshish kiti.....
Eda de halaat kar dite ki, hun je tutt k khilar jawa ta apna aap katha na kar ska.....
Tu eh kiwe bhul gya c rabba , k eh dil bahut saal pehle hi pathar ho gya c.....
kuch ku hisaa bachya c, ajj ohnu v pathar kar lya......
Te kadi bhala pathara nu v dukh hunda?
Tu raazi reh le merya rabba te ohna loka nu raazi rakh jehde mere maut di duya krde aa....
Tere nal hirkh ki kra hun.....
TERI TE HOND TE SHAKK JEHA HO REHA MENU AJJ.......
Tu menu rooh andro rawaya aa.....
Menu te es duniya ne bahut wari rabb bna k rollya aa...
Mere dil di duya aa rabba ki tu v kadi aurat ban k es duniya te rull k vekhe.....kade dhee, kade bhen, te kade maa ban k dekhe.....
By- navi
02 Aug 2014

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Beautifully written;>>> beyond words.

02 Aug 2014

Navi ......
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THANK U HARPAL G.....

BHT BHT SHUKRIYA.......

 


RABB NAL GILAA KITA C THODI DER PEHLE MAIN EH POST PAA K ....PAR IK NEK DIL INSAAN NAL EH WAAKIYA SAANJHA KITA TA OS PARMATMA NAL KITE GILLE CH ARDAAS NU V JOD K OHNU REPOST Kita aa......COZ OHNA DA KEHNA HAI KI

"OS PARMATMA NAL BAS ARDAAS TE SHUKRAANE DA HI RISHTA HAI SADA.....

DHANWAADI AA OS INSAAN DI BAHUT JYADA...JO MENU HAR CHANGEY MAARE TIME CH ES NU JEENA SIKHA TE PADAA RAHE NE.....

 

PLZ REFER TO

RABB NAL GILAA (AMENDED WITH ARDAAS) 

 

02 Aug 2014

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