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Navi ......
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SAFAR (a hindi nazam....)

 

Bas is baat ko janane ki zidd mein ki wo apna hai ya
paraya....

bahut door tak jana pada us farishtey ke saath
mujhe....

use uski manziloo ke raasto pe chod ke.....

waapisi ka akela safar konsa maut se kamm hai.....

roj usko ki huyi mahobbat ki khaatir

marr marr ke jeena padta hai.....

warna uska bichadna bhar hi konsa maut se kamm
hai....

Khush hai wo apne humsafar ke saath on raasto pe... 
bas isi liye......

warna khud ko khud se door karna konsa maut se
kamm hai....

by - NAVI  

 

 

05 Aug 2014

JAGJIT SINGH JAGGI
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Bahut khoobsoorat nzm hai. Keep rocking Navi ji.

GodBless!
05 Aug 2014

Sandeep Sharma
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Bahut khoob Navi G...Keep it up..TFS
05 Aug 2014

Gurpreet Khokhar
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Hindi hath tang aaa punjabi ch e likho tan jayda vadia
Vaise maitho foki wag wah nahi hundi
Gall kaudi aa par sachi aaa
07 Aug 2014

Navi ......
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gurpreet g tuhadi gal sir mathe.....shukriya sachi gal kehn da v....

 

par eh te ehsaas ne ......ehna di koi bhasha ni......

 

fir v gour karungi tuhadi gal te.....

 

bhul chukk maaf kario....

 

rabb rakha

07 Aug 2014

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