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mithi malhi
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sohniya shkla

ਸੋਹਣੀਆਂ ਸ਼ਕਲਾ ਵਾਲਿਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਬਹਾਨੇ ਅਉਂਦੇ ਉੱਤੋ ਪੜ ਲਿਖ ਜਾਣ ਤਾ ਬੜੇ ਡਰਾਮੇ ਅਉਂਦੇ ♦ __________________♥ღ♥*MalHI♥ღ♥*____________________

07 Mar 2011

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so nice and true wording ....

 

par mithi g ethe one line and two lines shayers layee alag topic bane hoye ne ... tuci othe ehna lines nu post kr skde o g...

 

thnx for share ur gud writing g...

07 Mar 2011

Divroop sandhu
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Dekho gall edan ki na ta eh shayer aa..Na hee kavita ! So es forum vich eh cheez jachdi nahi ! Vaise vi halke lafz vart ke balle-balle short term hee hundi hai ! Jhoothi sift ton bacho..te sanjeeda likho ! 

09 Mar 2011

ਕੁਲਜੀਤ  ਚੀਮਾਂ
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Agree with Divroop ji and Sunil...

 

 

09 Mar 2011

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