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vicky

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Zindegi se jo tum ja chuke ho,

har taraf se hum barbaad ho gaye,
Muskuraate hain khud ki maut par,

aansoo chhipaane mein ustaad ho gaye.

24 Nov 2010

Amrinder

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nice one... but bai ji... chhote sheyar post karn waaste

for hindi/urdu poetry

http://www.punjabizm.com/forums-urdu-poetry-18614-1-1.html

for punjabi poetry

http://www.punjabizm.com/forums-punjabi-sheyar-6345-1-1.html

ehna forums ch share kar sakde ho....

25 Nov 2010

vicky

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ok 20rr ji

26 Nov 2010

Aarti

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nice one

26 Nov 2010

Gagandeep

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sohna likheya G

26 Nov 2010

ARSHDEEP Rakhra

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kabil a tareef

28 Nov 2010

kirankaur

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bahut khub..wah ji

02 Dec 2010