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WAH SOFNA G

KYA SHER KEHA A TUCI


OYE KI NA TERA RAVI

LOKA DIA LIKHTA KARKE CHORI

TU NIE BAN SAKDA KAWI

 

WAH WAH WAH

05 Oct 2010

amandeep kaur
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behut hi vadia ga

05 Oct 2010

ਅਰਿੰਦਰ ਕੁਮਾਰ ਅਰੌੜਾ
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bahut sohna likheya hai...  "ravi" di jagah "sandhu" likh dinda taan nazam da wazan vi theek rehna si...  avi sare da sare wazan kharab kar ke rakh ditta...

05 Oct 2010

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ਬਾਈ ਆਇਆ ਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਮੁੜ ਕੇ ???

06 Oct 2010

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Amrinder Veer I think banning such people permanantly from punjabizm should be an appropirate move,,

06 Oct 2010

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RAVII SANDHU

ਬਾਕੀ ਤਾ ਠੀਕ ਪਰ ਕਵਲ ਤੇਰਾ ਵੀ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ REPLY ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਮੈਂ.. ਸਾਰਿਆਂ ਦਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਵਾਂਗਾ .. ਜੀਨੇ ਜੀਨੇ ਵੀ ਏਸ ਟੋਪਿਕ ਤੇ REPLY ਕੀਤਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਮੈਂ ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਦੇਵਾਂਗਾ,  ਫਿਰ ਸਾਰਿਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਫਿਰ ਕੁਝ ਸਵਾਲ ਕਰਾਂਗਾ ਕੀ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਵੋਗੇ? yes or no..

07 Oct 2010

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Dude do u not think instead starting stupid question answer its better to do some constructive work?  It seems to me that you wrote this GHAZAL especeialy to provoke these replies so that you can start something silly.  And you are expecting that we all be part that discussion.  Then simple reply is we do not have free time for that. 

 

I think I made everything clear.

 

Take Care

07 Oct 2010

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tu yaara swaal taa kr ....

fer vekhi ki jvaab devange ,....

cheti kr mann kahla painda jnda..

sochde aa slaahkaar saab de swaal khbre keho jhe hon ge ....

 

mainu taa eh  v  darr hai k kite tere swaal v chori de naa hon ......??lolz

07 Oct 2010

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hun kehan nu ki reh geya bai........ 

 

pata ni kehdi mitti da baneya tu...... 

07 Oct 2010

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@ stalin veer g


ehne ki swal krne ne. Eh khud aap ek swal a

07 Oct 2010

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