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KOTHI

EK KAHANI OHNA LAYEE JO JA KE PARDESAN VICH VASDE NE TA APNE GHAR DIYAN NU BHUL JANDE NE

 

MAIN EK DIN PARDES GAYA C

OTHE APNE VATAN WALE NAL PECH PEYA C

 

KHUSH HO GAYA MAIN OHNU MIL KE

OHDIYA V ANKHAN CHO HANJU NIKAL GAYE

 

KUJ NA KEHNDE HOYE V BHUT GALLA HOYIAN

JAD VAPAS CHALE TAN DOVAN DIYAN AKHAN ROYEEAN

 

OS NE MAINU APNE GHAR DA PTA DITA

MAIN OHDI GHAR VAL FERA KITA

 

MAINU KHUSHI C K MAIN OHDE GHAR CHALYAN HAN JO APNEYA TO DUR H

APNE GHAR DIYAN JARURTA LAYEE APNE GHAR TO DUR H

 

EK BANDE NE MAINU OHDA GHAR VIKHAYA

VEKH GHAR MERA PASINNA AAYA

 

OH GHAR NAI EK KOTHI C

JIS DE SAMNE MERE GHAR DI GALI V CHHOTI C

 

MAIN ANDAR GAYA TA GHANG DI AAVAJ AAYEE

ANDRO SAYAD OS MUNDE DI MAA BAHAAR AAYEE

 

MAIN SAT SRI AKAL KEH KE PAIRAN NU HATH LAYA

GALLAN GALLAN CH OHDE MUNDE BARE SATT PAYA

 

SUN GAL PUTT APNE DI RON LAG PAYEE

ANDRO LIHA KE APNE PUTTAR DI PHOTO DIKHAUN LAG PAYEE

 

MERI V AKHAN OHDI GALLAN NAL NAM HO GAYEEAN

LAGDA C JIVEN OHDE HATHRU VEKH HAWAWAN V SO GAYEEAN

 

MAA DA DARD VEKH MAIN SOCHI PAI GAYA

KI KRNA ES KOTHI DA JE PUTT CHHAD JAAN DI KEH GAYA

 

KINIYAN DIWALIAN TE MAA NE HANJUA DE DEEP BALE C

HOLI DE DIN V OHDE LAYEE TAN BILKUL KALLE C

 

GHAR CHHAD JAAN DE CHA APNIYAN NU PARDES LA GAYEE

KI KRNA ES KOTHI DA J MAA HI KALLI REH GAYEE

 

 

(MAAVAN DHANDIYAN CHHAVAN)

 

(PUNJABI VERSION SECOND PAGE TE HAI G..)

(WRITTEN BY SUNIL KUMAR 30-08-2010)

30 Aug 2010

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vadiya 22 g gud nazare baan dita

30 Aug 2010

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bauth vadiya lekhiya 22g

31 Aug 2010

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sahi gall hai 22 g tuhadi 

sunil 22 g hun tussi bahut vadiya likhan lagg gaye

31 Aug 2010

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BAHUT HI SOHNI RACHNA JEHDI KE IKK SCHAAI BIAAN KRDI HAI

 

 

SACH PAD KE AKHIN ATHRU AA GAY SAHI KEHA TUSI KI KRNA EHO JEHI KMAI DA JIS VICH BANDA USDE AAPNEAN DI SHAKAL TAK NHI DEKH PAUNDA KHAS TOR TE USDI MAA JO KE APNE BACHEAN LAI TARS JANDI E JE USDE BACHE KUJ DER USNU NA DISAN.

 

 

 

 

31 Aug 2010

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bahut vadia ........likhia sunil ji 

31 Aug 2010

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itzz vryy vryy nycc...TFS Sunil..

31 Aug 2010

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bohat vadiya likheya tusi...very touching poem

31 Aug 2010

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sarya piyare mitrran Sukriya g da jo tuhanu meri kalam pasand aayee g

31 Aug 2010

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well done

its fantastic amazing superb !! keep it up

31 Aug 2010

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