eh kaafi chirr pehla likhiyan lines(khulli kavita)de roop vich  tuhade saamne rkh reha ...........

this is in context to a rural women giving birth to a girl child nd thnkin of its consequences on the girls life.........
eh sirf meri apni soch te adharatt hai ....
waise eh topic ta betuke sawalan da hai but j ehna swaalan di koi tukk nikle ta jroor dasseyo........!!!!!


"dheeyan kukh ch maarna ek paap hai....
eh anjammiyan de sir te shraap hai......"
gal dil di eh jaanke main janm kuri nu ditta......
par hun sochn nu majboor haan k main eh ki hai keeta....??

ki eh duniya ehnu ek puttr wangu apnaugi...?
ki mere in-laws di family kde ehdi lohri manaugi...??
ki ehnu vi mundeyan wang azaadi mil paugi...??
ya eh vi hora waang ethe vilku te kurlaugi....??
te mere wangu zulm seh,chupp rehna sikh jaugi...??

pher hauka jeha bhar main socheya....
k kde oh vi din auga...??

jdo shraabi bapu ehda ehnu laad ladauga...??
ehnu kuchhr chakk "mera puttr" aakh bulauga...??
ki ehnu kde 10vi,12vi to baad vi parhauga...??
te duniya ch milda ehda asli haq davauga....??
ehde viah ch hon wala oh kharcha kitho leyauga...??
ya koi "karma wala" ehnu bina dahej to vi viahuga...??

KI KDE OH VI DIN AUGA....??
JADO "MUNDA" HON DA HAQ "KURI" KOL JAUGA...??

eh gal main kalli ni har "maa" hougi krdi....
jo vi dhee de dukh ch ghutt-2 k hou mardi........!!

mera gal ta "gill" ne kagaji seene te likh laini...
par anne samaj nu vi ta eh gal sochni paini.....
j eddan hi talwar latkdi dheeyan de sir rehni....
pher mere dil di gal vi thoddi dhee ne hi kde sehni.....

aajo duniya waleyo eh gal layie apnaa....
ewe na kisse dhee de hatho,dhee deo maraa....
ewe na kisse dhee de hatho,dhee deo maraa....!!!

Wah 22. Pehla vi parhi hai shayad punjabi poetry ch. Karari chot

gill saab kmaal di rachna!! sach n wdhiya easy words de likhi hoyi..loved it.. :)

sire la ti gill saab ....bahut khoob likhiya g ..

gill sahib aah tan kamaal kar diti.

ek maa d veidna inne sohne shabdan ch pesh kar k tusi sabit kar dita hai k mard pardhaan samaaj vich jad tak tuhadi soch warge insaan hun,tad tak kudiyian nu aapne haqan d ladae ladni auakhi nae ,balki tuhade warge insaan haqq vich brabar d awwaz athuan lae tyar bar tyar rehangey.

hattsof you

awesome

chlo ikk wari jehdiyan jammian de v armaan poore ni hunde ,, ruldian ohna bare v gall kriye.. ohna da ki kita jawe..??

RULAN NA  KADE PUNJAB DIYA BACHIYAN

JE LOKI GALLAN KARAN EHNA DIYA SACHIYA

SOCHAN LAYI MAJBOOR HO JAO

DOOBAN LAGIYAN JEHRIYAN UHNA NU BACHAO

JE DEKHNIYA RULADIYA DIYAN

EK VARI PARDES HO KE AAO

BHEJIYA JEHRIYA UMRA DIYA KACHIYA

RULAN NA KADE PUNJAB DIYA BACHIYA

JE LOKI GALLAN KARAN EHNA DIYA SACHIYA

DEKH MUNDE DI JAMEEN TE GEHNE

KEHNDE MUNDEY DE KI KEHNE

LALACH WICH AA KE

BINA SOCHEYA DHEE DE BEHNDE

VHAH TON BAAD KAYI BHOLIYA

AGGA LA KE MACHIYA

RULAN NA KADE PUNJAB DIYAN BACHIYA

JE LOKI GALLAN KARAN EHNA DIYA SACHIYA

SOCH APNI NU BADAL DEYA YAARO

RAL KE HAMBALLA TUSI KOYI MAARO

KURHIYA NU IZZAT DIVVON LAYI

NAVI LEHAR KOYI TUSI USARO

ARSH NE A LINES ,HALLAT NU DEKH KE RACHIYA

RULAN NA KADE PUNJAB DIYA BACHIYA

JE LOKI GALLAN KARAN EHNA DIYA SACHIYA

Balle mundeya chaa gaya.. Sire la ti.. Jeonda reh mittra.

22 ANI HAWA NA DE MAIN PATT JO GA?

BAKI THANK U