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Arshpreet Kaur
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ਲਫਜਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਆ ਕੇ ਕਿਓਂ ਮੁੜ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਏ

Lafzan wich aa ke kyon mod jaandi Ae

Meri Fariyaad kyun tere tak nahi jaandi Ae


Sau Rabb di main usnu paak pyaar hai keeta

Fir usnu kyon ishq karan di jaach nahi Aaundi Ae


Kehdi Asees Si jo main laini bhul gayi

Badeyan di Mehar Thalle Saadi har Ghadi Beet jaandi Ae


Sun Ve Rabba Tu Vi ajma ke dekhda Mohabbatan di Dor nu

Kite Avein tutt ke Gandh iss Wich ta nahi Aaundi Ae


Arsh B.
17 Oct 2012
Manpreet Nangal
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nice

nice lines.......
17 Oct 2012
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Khoob........
17 Oct 2012
Arshpreet Kaur
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thank you ji Manpreet and J ji 
17 Oct 2012
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gud one arsh

17 Oct 2012
Arshpreet Kaur
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thanks ji sunil ji 
18 Oct 2012
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achchhi koshish hai

is rhythm ch likho te behtar howegi

 

lafzaan de vich aake kyon muR jaandi ae

Arz meri kyon tere tak na jaandi ae
18 Oct 2012
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