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ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਬਚਪਨ ਚੇਤੇ ਕਰਕੇ

ਵਕਤ ਜਿਹਾ ਰੁੱਕ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਏ,

ਬਾਪੂ ਤੇਰੀ ਕੀਤੀ ਮਿਹਨਤ ਅੱਗੇ
ਸਿਰ ਮੇਰਾ ਝੁੱਕ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਏ,

ਵਕਤ ਬਦਲਿਆ , ਦੁਨਿਆ ਬਦਲੀ
ਹਰ ਇੱਕ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਾ ਤਾਰ ਤਾਰ ਏ,

ਬਾਪੂ ਤੇਰਾ ਪੁੱਤਰ ਅੱਜ ਵੀ
ਤੇਰੀਆਂ ਝਿੜਕਾਂ ਦਾ ਕਰਜ਼ਦਾਰ ਏ........unkwn.

02 Aug 2014

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ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬ ਜੀ...ਬਿਲਕੁਲ ਸੱਚ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ।TFS

02 Aug 2014

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WOW ! Wonderfully sweet poem.

Bahut hi sunder ate touching.......

Kudos j ji ! GodBless !

02 Aug 2014

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awesome.....

very nice......

ultimate sir......

maa baap da karz de kadi v ni laah skde jehna krke es duniya te sada wajood aa.....

02 Aug 2014

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Thnx....2....all.....

09 Aug 2014

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ਸਾਂਝਾ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਵੀਰ ,,,ਜੀਓ,,,

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Thnx...veer ji....

11 Oct 2014

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Nice

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Nice g

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Thnx....Sanjeev ji....

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