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Us shaks di ki tareef karanJine kabil tareef de banaya mainu, Keda tohfa ode naseeb karan Jine zindgi di sez sajaya mainu… Raje rank jahe rishte ch bane haan Keeti jandi na barabri ode paira di vi Aapan ang ode da ik hissa haan Vakh ho na sakde otho kadi… Ehsaan mand ha us shaks de loko Jine rondeyan di akhan nu punjaya si Jine vishvaas aap te sikhaya karna One digke bhajna vi sikhaya si… Mul mod na hona sari zindgi oda Paanve lakh mehntan kar lao Karz rehna sir te sari zindgi oda Paanve uchaiyan saari chum lao… Us shaks nu mera salaam loko Jeda rab banke mere kol rave Ode charna ch milda swarg mainu Jinu duniya saari maa kave….
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16 Dec 2010
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22 g good work but je punjabi wich likh de tan hor maza auna c
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16 Dec 2010
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Vadhia te hai par format sahi nahi hai.....
I mean k ikk lekh/story vaang hai....
isnu poem de roop ch post karo taan vadhia laggey...
jekar naal d naal gurmukhi 'ch type v hovey taan fer te kee kehney....
Waise is da writer kaun hai 22 g ?
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16 Dec 2010
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vadhiya lekin plz jidan Balihar jee ne keha poem vaangu likheyo next time. other than that bahut hi shandaar
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16 Dec 2010
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very nice...keep it up....
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21 Dec 2010
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Bahut hi wadia likhea ji :)
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23 Dec 2010
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